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A Poem by topsyturvy
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this is my most recent thing, the others were made a few years back..:) see the difference? :)

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Memories coming from a distant past
Shallow breathing in an empty hall
Frustration comes from an unyielding trauma of a child so blue
Wounds in and out of a fellow whose heart is pure and true.
The hunter comes at the fox with his rifle aimed high
And all the people could do was just weep and sigh.

© 2008 topsyturvy


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Amazing.
Not too sure why but it gave me an eerie and feeling of overwhelming sadness when it talked about the hunter and the fox. Foxes are my favorite animals of all time.
Good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 25, 2008

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