I Never Wanted

  "You promised!"
  "I didn't promise s**t."
  "But you told me."
  "Told me what?"
  "That you loved me."
  "I lied."
  "Bullshit."
  "Are you doubting me?"
  "You meant it. I know it."
  "I wanted to get inside you're pants."
  "And you did. Ya happy?"
  "Yeah. Now I'm done."
  "Done?"
  "It was a good run."
  "You b*****d."
  "Don't call me that."
  "B*****d. B*****d. B*****d. Sonofabitch."
  "You'll regret that."
  "What the hell is you're problem! You don't hit a girl."
  "Ha. You're crying. Priceless."
  "F**k you."
  "But you did f**k me."
  "Get the hell out."
  "Aw. But, I'll be back for another round, baby."
   "He's gone....


    
                 Come back...."

Author's Note

All dialogue. So, its back and forth, so its not one person, or three. Only two. Please review.

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

It's excellent! This is the sort of story I think has a powerful packed punch on people... especially if they were going through this themselves.
Great work.

[Thorn]

I like it.
I notice how many horrible males there are in your stories, though. Such nasty people...

Although, this one is very easy to understand. I like how you split up the last sentence. It kind of gives the effect that the girl feels somewhat lost.