Won't Be The Same

         The song in my head is not of
               romance,
                  love,
                     hope.
 
                 It is of
                   hate,
                     enemies,
                         rape.

      My eyes water, threaten to spill.
           I choke on my tears.
             My heart aches.
     I want pity.
     I want sympathy.
     I want empathy.


                  The prison.
                       The cage.

           They have their way with you.
           
            All you want is mercy.
             But those cruel b******s,

                can't give it.


     Grinding teeth.
 Screaming to get the voices out.
   Wanting to die.
 
            Freedom.
              Peace.
             Harmony.

          Those are foreign words to you.

       Your heart blackens.
          Emotionless.
     An empty shell.

     Your mind fogs.
          Wandering through the endless depths of sorrow.

       Cut,
       Burn,
       Pain,
       Tears.

  Real life drama,
   seems like a walk in the park.
 
                  When you make your escape,
                 your won't be the same innocent person
                        anymore.

 

Author's Note

inspired by the song Hatefuck by The Bravery. Yeah, ive been writing a lot of poems lately, because I don't have the time for stories.

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

It's gorgeous, and I know thast isn't a word people would use for such a dark poem, but it is. I loved every single bit of hate that you poured in. You seemed very 'into' the poem and meant what you wrote.
Awesome job!!!

[Ross Saunders]

Well, this is very dark and very charged. I thought it was an exceptional poem, but I would suggest maybe using a smaller font? At this size it kind of distracts.