Cross Out

Two friends email to eachother, crossing out what they really want to say.

     Dear Nick ([email protected]),

   Remember the first day we met? We had no idea what would happen. Confused, excited and odd all at the same time.  The first day of school, the worst thing ever. And we were placed right next to each other. You were so nervous, you started talking about books that you thought were cool. That was so cute, how you blushed when the jerk next to us said you were a geek. I didn't think you were a geek, all I did was admire your hair. And the books that you liked. Who knew we would have so much in  common? Well, hope your well.
 
             Love
             Your friend, Vivian
 
 
            Dear Vivian,  ([email protected])

   I am well. Because you finally wrote to me! I've been obsessed, checking my email inbox every five seconds. Just kidding. Maybe. So, how have you been? I miss you...Anyways! I was wondering if you have the new Warriors book, if you do, send it to me! So....I have your picture album. You left it here when you showed it to me before you left. You look beautiful funny in those pictures. Well, hope your fine.

                              Yours Always,
                                      From,
     Nick


            Dear Nick,

    I miss you too.  A lot. I keep remembering how my dad died. You came to his funeral with me. You didn't have to. I never thanked you for that. And how after the funeral I ran away, and you found me, bawling by the creek. And I just starting hugging  you, sobbing into your shoulders. And you didn't pull away. Thank you.

                              I want to see you again. Sincerely,
                                         Vivian
    

             Dear Viv,
                 Yeah, my shirt was soaked after you pulled away. I didn't know why I came to your dad's funeral. I guess I just couldn't leave you to stand alone, no one to be there with you beside your mom, who went into a psychotic grief.
                                     -Nick

                
 

          Dear Nick,
       
                     Yeah. That was sweet.

  Yours,   Viv







                 Dear Viv,

                           I can't stand this any longer. I have to tell you.
 
   Urgently yours,
          Nicko.
 





                     Dear Nick,
              
                         Tell me what?

                                  Vivian.





     
                      Dear Viv,
 
               I need to tell you that I think I'm madly in love with you, Vivian.

                                  Nick


                 Dear Nick,

           Nick, I was madly in love with you from that first time I saw you. And I know that sounds cheesy, but cheesy is all I have to form the feelings I have.

                              Love,
                                   Viv

 
     
          Dear Vivian,    
     
         I love you. 

                     Love always always always,
                       Nick.

           
     

                      

          
    

           
    

Author's Note

Argh! I know that got really cheesy at the end...Im sorry. Its all I got. I have watched so many cliche romance chick flicks that I cant get it out of my system. For squirrely, who is currently romancing through emails. :)

Reviews

[Song]

Oh god. LMFAOOO. Jeeze lousie! BWAHAHAH Good times, good times.

[Essy]

oh my god....im laughing so hard right now......i think im the only one who will laugh but you know why i am.....

[E. R. Rawding]

It's really sweet, and you're right; it's very cheesy. It still isn't that bad though. Very interesting concept! :)

[Thorn]

A sweet little piece. ^^

The ending seems a bit rushed, though. I think?
Not sure. I might elaborate later, if I have time.

[Bella-Marie]

Yep. The end was as cheesy as blue cheese. But also very sweet. Cutsie pie. Loved the format you took with it. I think you could have done more crossing-out though.
Otherwise, cuuuuuuute.