Red Anger

Red Anger

A by TopHatGirl

   The

      Red

         Anger

           Spills

              Across

                The

                   Floor.

   

  Wails,

      Cries,

          Heartaches,

              Can be witnessed at this scene.

                        

                            Shouldn't

                            Have

                            Opened

                            The murderer's pain.

                         

                   Who was this man?

                    Who was this man who risked his life?

                      Who was this man who risked his life for total strangers?

                     All I know is that he's already

                         Gone.

         It was a robbery.

         A bank.

         He had a gun.

         He was insane.

                         crazy.

                          mad.

                          lost?

    Another man risked his life.

            Leaped in front of the bullet

                       that was aimed

                             for a pregnant woman.

                                   

 

    The police was too late.

               He was already

                  Dead.

                      

                 Deaths: 1

                 Hearts broken: Countless

           

                           

                     

© 2009 TopHatGirl


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Wow, great description. So creative. Keep it up!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is...definitely something I've not seen quite like this. The toll at the end as well. Thanks for the read

Posted 11 Years Ago



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