Revenge Plan Part 1

I don't really want reviews. This is just a basic script for a friend. Not completed.

      Scene shows two girls sitting across from eachother on a bedroom floor. A lit candle is in-between them. One is obviously goth, black nails, black lipstick, the works. The other looks normal, pulled back brown hair, glasses, t-shirt. The camera zooms in on the normal girl, and pauses. Narration begins.

          That's me. My name is Bree Hunter. I'm a perfectly average girl, with a perfectly average life.

 Scene changes. It has a series of video clips, of her getting good grades, her hugging her parents, and her holding hands with a moderatly handsome boy.

            I get straight a's, have a loving family, and a steady boyfriend.

  Scene changes back to the scene with the candle. The girls are in motion again. It zooms in on the goth girl, and pauses.

             That's my best friend, Kelcey Smith. She loves the color black, and hates anything pink. I love her anyways.

   The scene pans out again, showing both girls. You can hear them talking.

   Kelcey: Bree, this is getting lame.

   Bree:frowns. Well what do you want to do?

   Kelcey: grins maliciously. I'll tell your fortune with tarot cards.

   Bree: shrugs. Okay. Just don't do the whole gypsy act, okay?

   Kelcey: sighs. That was only one time, and that was because I had a crystal ball.

   Bree: That was a basketball.

   Kelcey: scoffs. Whatever! Let's just tell your fortune. Searches through a big pile of stuff, and pulls out a deck of tarot cards. Aha!

   Bree: You should clean your room.

   Kelcey: glares. Shut up.

   Bree: Well? Are you going to tell my fortune or not?

   Kelcey: Yes yes. She begins shuffling the cards, and goes through a series of card flipping and shuffling. You can no longer hear them, but you can see Bree picking out random cards and Kelcey shuffling them again. After about 10 seconds, you can hear them again. Bree picks out her last card, and Kelcey flips it over. It showed a wheel.

   Kelcey: In a whisper. The wheel of fortune.

   Bree: Laughs. What? Does that mean Pat Sajak will come and murder me?

   Kelcey: The wheel of fortune usually means good luck. But.

   Bree: Is silent. But what?

   Kelcey: It's in reverse.

   Bree: What does that mean?

   Kelcey: It means you will have terrible luck.

      Scene pauses. Narration continues.

   That was the moment my life changed, for worse.