Pain

True story. Short story. Not a story at all. Just pain.

Pain throbbed in my brain. It was like a hammer. Bam. Bam. Bam. Unbearable.

I yelped. The pain was overwhelming.

I called out for help but of course no one could hear me.

I was alone.

I could feel my body collapsing under my weight.

My sight was flooded with black dots.

I reached out to hold something, anything. But my hand grabbed air.

Tears streamed my face, but I wasn't crying.

Finally I couldn't take it anymore.

My head hit the floor, and I passed out.

 

Author's Note

Yes, this happened to me. Yes, it was horrifying. Yes, I am emotionally scarred. Yes, you should review.

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i am sorry because this happened to u . this is amazing short but to the point, i like it

[Bella-Marie]

That was a great way of exspressing how you felt then. Good work!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This happened to me once when I had a really high fever as a kid. It is indeed scary. For a short
piece..you collected all of your thoughts perfectly. Great job.

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

I'm sorry that you had this happen to you for whatever reason. i bet it was hard to deal with and im more than likely sure that it was terrifying, hopefully you never have to deal with that again. but beside the point i like the flow of whatever it is, poem, story, just your thoughts or whatever. i really liked it.