Ivory lace

Silk space on beads of lace beyond the sands
We lay on ivory stars of shimmering glass
Tonight wishes came true in loving lace
Turning grace into intimate embraces of tune
The echoing shade returning from a distant land
We have seen each other since we could stand
Another gleaming reflection of the perfect you
A silhouette of lace in ivory blue to make of
The sun of Island like golden rose as we sink
Even deeper into sands we glow
The ivory lace I seen you through
While holding me deeper into you
We felt and knelt to this moment in time forever and ever
Together we find
You tie my heart in long lace blue
Hold me closer forever to be true

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing movement of words dear poet.
"We felt and knelt to this moment in time forever and ever
Together we find"
The above lines. I could write a epic poem from. Thank you Nooni for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Merci 🙏🙏🙏🙏

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hazy]

Very pretty, I love your use of imagery and the repetition of the ivory lace. Reading this makes me feel at peace.

[Nisreen]

Thank you hazy

[AYVID N]

This is so good to read. Loved the delicate imagery woven into the words. Blue never felt so beautiful before.

[Nisreen]

Thanks Divya

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome. :)

[Richard🖌]

Happy greetings, Nooni 🌾

Your title and chosen artwork is the perfect accoutrement to set the ambiance for your beautifully rendered poetry.
In particular, I enjoy well-struck Free Style poetry, with it intermittent inner and end rhymes, which you've eloquently utilized throughout the silky smooth flow of lines, emotions, vivid imagery, and breathlessly creative metaphor.

"Tonight wishes came true in loving lace
Turning grace into intimate embraces of tune
The echoing shade returning from a distant land"

Sheesh, that's (simply put), gorgeous in every way romantic poetry should be, as is every other line.
Thank you with my heart for sharing your skillful elegance! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard

[Richard🖌]

You're welcome, Nooni,
It was a true delight.
Please, drop by my place sometime.

[Chris Shaw]

We felt and knelt to this moment in time forever and ever …….
How beautifully romantic your lines are. Filled with togetherness and love. First of yours I have read. Pleased to have stopped by today.

Chris

[Nisreen]

Thanks 🙏 Chris

[willweb]

Love is gently laced through your poem this day my friend. This reads as if whispered softly across the summer sand. The beauty of your words is found in every line. Very nice.

[Nisreen]

Thanks will
I am a romantic

[andrew mitchell]

Romantic interludes in the desert, the desert sky come to mind with your imagery and I know you are from theUnited Arab Emirates so that helps . 😉

[Nisreen]

😂 I am from Egypt but live in uae
Thank you Andrew 🙏🙏🙏 well read

[andrew mitchell]

I was close lol. 😉

[Nisreen]

Yup yup 😁😁😁