Waves in Perpetual Moon

Rippling life mirrors a soft trend

Coming about in sheers of ice

Chasing lights that take short flights

Off such grounds of resemblance 

A balance of light liquid blue 

Beats of syrup like sweet elixir 

Touching each tongue of sound

A moon glistens by a tide often shored

Hiding her beauty from every steering face

Facade of her less known to the common tongue

She wound kindles of imagined hope 

In prepetual moon dewy wave they dance

Lifting the pales of buffered blues

Attires would match in a crystal crowd

The ruby crown she wears speaks of nights

Gazing through dawn she illuminates this place

The forest of sea renderings almost flown

As she is fond oblivion to the curtained stage

Keep watch blood red luna kind to all

Waiting one day she will be found 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Great poetic description here of the moon and moods. She has many faces and shows variations in colour. Beautiful image to accompany your words Nooni. Thank you.

Chris

[Nisreen]

Merci chris

[andrew mitchell]

A poet called Nisreena writes likes this. Very rich in imagery and always a lovely meandering flow Nooni.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Andrew 😁😁😁

[andrew mitchell]

🤗😀"……………

[Chris Shaw]

Visually stunning. First of yours I have read. Pleased to have stopped by Precious Seconds.

Chris

[Nisreen]

Thanks Chris

[Roland Petrov]

I do love blood red tuna! Oh, I just see that it was the blood red moon, the luna. You confused me with the introduction of something that can't be tasted. But your poem really is tasty.

[Weeping willow]

Wonderful write as nature fills the mind with your words ;-]

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Waves in Pepetual Moon'
Precious Seconds,
What do we feel? What do we know? Nature is very inspiring. The ocean, a lake, a river, a pond; it reflects in a way that simply can enthrall. Finding the words is the joy. Expressing the simple but complex is our prestige our honor. The above poem simply flows in a free for all stream of beauty!
BLessings,
Kathy

[Nisreen]

Thank you Kathy

[Onlyme]

Delightful articulate, expressive and with great use of visual images inside your mind on reading it. Beautiful done. Thanks for sharing.

[Nisreen]

Thanks Dawn appreciate your review

[Quasi-Motorolla]

Beautiful imagery! A great piece!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Einstein Noodle]

lots of images and contrasts .. the ambiguity steels away being emotive ..its like being taken along a very short path by unresolved promises .. i want a little more understanding in reading this ..but that's just me no doubt .. its very imaginative and creative with sharp imagery
E.

[Nisreen]

i was staring at a lake that had semi frozen over and i felt emotions that had no attribute so i just wrote them as is