Space Bender

Convex in nature 

Opulent to the touch 

The petition left to tone

Some form of nature

Forged out of tendency

The element of self ridden time

The must have of the meanings

Calling to a place

Just in time the luck strikes

Travel of thought taken

Sitting by the tide

Branding the silence

A stare lost out

Driving pass the midnight 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

This for me reflects a moment passing and the daydream that dwells on that moment.

[Nisreen]

Right on the money
Thanks for your review

[andrew mitchell]

😁😊😊😊😊😊😊

[willweb]

It is said that time and space are straight lines, horizontal to each other. As we sit alone, staring lost n=into this space we dream and hope for some kind of guidance, maybe even an answer to a question. If only we had the time to discover...if only our thoughts would curve into one another...if only space wasn't eternal.
Very cool, your style is out of this world. : )

[Nisreen]

Thank you will

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the thought reaches the page...sometimes we have to bend that space quite a lot to get it there.
but it is called to that place, and we poets help it get there.
j.

[Nisreen]

We sure do
Thank you Jacob

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Space Bender'
Precious Seconds,
To me this was a writing of life having times
which seem predestined and are perfect.
'Forged out of tendency
The element of self ridden time
'The must have of the meanings
Calling to a place'
I can identify with the context of this writing.
Elements just fall together within a season,
a moment, an experience. As your title explains,
Space bender...just on time.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Nisreen]

Thank you dear Kathy

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

The title really captured me and drew my attention to this poem. It's very interesting. Your phrasing and structure and flow add an element that's very unique. Thank you for sharing, my friend.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Micael

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Made the reader think and ponder.
"Sitting by the tide
Branding the silence"
I liked the above lines. Great meaning in the simple statement. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Davidgeo]

Eh, inconsistent and that really ruins an otherwise acceptable thing.

Some of your stanza's are self contained while others are not....

For example these do not stand on their own (a comma might help one of them)
"Forged out of tendency
The element of self ridden time"

(add a comma after tendency, it helps more than the aesthetic of not having punctuation)

"Just in time the luck strikes
Travel of thought taken"


(Change "travel" to "travels" or add a "the" at the start of the second line.)

I imagine this is about a watch and the arbitrary nature of the human perception of time. Pretty good idea if that's the case.

[Nisreen]

Thank you David

[Sumo]

To me this represents the struggle for identity. Endless nights awake fighting for answers all alone..

[Nisreen]

Maybe so. Maybe Not

[Lorry]

This has such a dreamlike quality to your words, which I imagine as a movie reel playing out images to your words, with the images and words melting into one, bending light, reality and imagination.

[Nisreen]

Not sure why this piece got so much attention
Thank you so much

[James]

Makes me want to go sit on the beach all night...not this time of year, though, way too cold.

[Nisreen]

I think we still have beach time here maybe Two more weeks

Thank You James