Tidal Brush

The morning night as waves form

I stare right into you

Crimson weight 

As we brush across 

Like the most gentle tide

Subtle sun

Seated in perfect position

Our clocks have aligned

Warm shores

A sigh traveled through a shield

You held your composure

Luring gaze

Driving me to your safety

Rebellious is my nature

Crisp white

For you are nurture

As i held my breathing heart

Your eyes pierce so many shades

Serene lock

From cascading blue 

To the eager red within

Bristle blow

It dawned on me

In moments positioned

Tender melt

You are the future

Touching my hands

Hues of light

Pulling me to safety

I side tracked to listen

Render 

As my thoughts float on your boat

Opal ode

I may have detoured

But you stole my soul

Tidal gentle whisper

Telling me there is no rear view mirror

Only you

Holding us together

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I’m convinced you can make a desert into an oasis. Ever the romantic you are Nisreena.

[Nisreen]

Thanks Andrew

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Tidal Brush'
Precious Seconds,
This reminded me of the way the waves catch the sun and colors change as they undulate through there own depths of ocean beauty. But in all this love is the color and the light. It felt like that to me. Really beautiful the way you share a double meaning and description with the one, two and three word captions of simple description for each stanza. Unique and refreshing poem!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Nisreen]

Thank you dear Kathy

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Descriptive is beautiful in this poem I wish i could write like this

[B]

I am sure you can. Thank you

[MOON]

Beautifully told a love that moves the heart and soul. Lovely write.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that slight brush of a turn of a tide, finding that someone who will float our boat...and give us a safe boat on which to sail our love...

a love that holds the other and both together...no need for life jackets...

there is safety for the heart.

[Nisreen]

Oh yes
thanks for always understanding me

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i love how described the changes in life and love so vividly over 2 poems the imagery really enthralled me these poem tell a entire lifetime of change in so few words great job serendipity ! (:

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much

[TheAimlessWanderer]

your welcome (:

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Wow. So intense and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much

[Nwang]

This is a fine piece of work. Nicely constructed and well written. Thanks for sharing :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your support

[Einstein Noodle]

oh how i am in love with love ...so much to inspire ...colors, feelings, senses of touch by hands and sea breezes .. "Opal ode" what a treasure!! ahhhhhh heavy cleansing sigh ;)
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much E

[Ted Kniffen]

Serendipity, I really like how you wove what appears to be two poems together to make a beautiful piece about love. Good write

[Nisreen]

Thanks Ted !!