St. John's Wort

Color splashed sets mumble 

Music dripping docile empty drums

Another act to fond-land

Mere glances

Sounds of Irish English dissipating 

Newfinese so they say

Thoughts sit here

Is that fish in a sandwich ?

The immediate relay in this head

Oh i love fish

A serene Smile

You sarcastic one

Some tease this is

Fingerprints on paper to date

Highways of green lights

There you go

Looking into me again

Fixated in your air

I can't move 

So i hum you away

Cumulus humilis clouds of torture

So do figures known written

Breeze out is but one walk

Bizarrely odd

Shelved out to store 

St. John's Wort

Promising all year long rain

Mountain sheer clarity 

Enough with the cynicism subliminally waved

Having brushed my music twined into hair

Going for diligence

Pinning up those random shots

If i find your presence 

That shall be the last of many

Stand corrected land mines signed

I love you

Signaling at this none ending road

No forks to choose on

Discovering you

Ran series of brain stoppers

To question this reality

Yes a calm 

Comprehended fully registered

a change

For seconds i remained polite

Censoring all swear words

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I use the herbal medicine. I do rotate the use St. John's Wort. My time in the army. Messed up legs and back, The poem took reader with into deep thoughts and interesting places. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[JayG]

I haven't seen a random word poetry generator in use for years.

[Nisreen]

Lol
Thanks Jay

[wordman]

you painted a beautiful image with words

[Nisreen]

Thank you wordman

[An owl on the moon]

You have a way of threading thoughts into a world, a story that unfolds through glimpses, like a movie, each picture a light and shadow on the one to come. These glimpses take us into your life, your journey, so profoundly, dear poet.

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[barleygirl]

I don't know what the heck this means (I'm no good at interpreting abstract), but it's described with a maximum amount of uninhibited imagination. Good word choices thru-out that contribute to assonance & consonance (similar sounds grouped together, such as: "cynicism subliminally"). It feels like the narrator is opinionated in a commanding way, expressing whatever wildly-described sentiments are occurring moment by moment, as if everyone should know this s**t, & it all feels very fast-paced. These are unusual effects that most people never even get close to, with free form poetry.

[andrew mitchell]

As breath-taking as the picture my friend, except maybe the fish sandwich would take your breath away too. I personally love Kippers in brine. A wonderful meandering journey of thoughts you took me on. :)

[Nisreen]

Never tried that .... I am gonna Google it
Thanks Andrew

[Lorry]

This feels, sounds, tastes and smells of thought freefall, letting your mind focus only on the handwriting muscle, via the heart and the part of the brain titled wishful. Methinks the serenity is title laden with this mysterious herbal remedy that ails more than aches of bone and muscle. It certainly has a dream like, or perhaps just enlightened willingness to see where the thoughts take you, into so much colour and vibrancy. I did lol at the fish thought, because if I am correct, you are talking about thoughts flowing, and your response to that thought is a simple et profound thought, almost child like in its answer, which is by no means an insult, as I truly believe the world would be a better place if kids were in charge.
I love the Irish English part too, which is larger than one may see, as so much of what your thoughts say are conveyed in a way that supposes you know of these places well, with little nuances of sayings and how they are said.
I think the ending, realising your politeness, is perfect in summing up those moments of calm, where we realise that any resentment or anger we were feeling has gone, even if momentarily, a welcome release surely.
I think this shall be read over and over, as it has the feel that I haven't even scratched the surface of it yet. So be warned, further thoughts may appear on each read. I shall post any addendums to see where your journey takes me. :)

[Nisreen]

You speak French .... thank you for your rêview
I was totally spaced out

[Lorry]

Basically, non...Unless it's naughty French you're talking about :)

[Nisreen]

Nope just the normal standard french because you wrote et

[Lorry]

Ahhh, Je ne parle un peu l'école française :)

[Paul Bell]

Just tried smoking some of that wort john stuff. What's it supposed to do.
Anyway. Fine flow the with go to meant am i alright.

[Nisreen]

Its not a drug
It's a herbal supplement
I just ran across it
And it does help aid with physical pain

Thank you for your review.

[Ken Simm.]

I can see this as one side of a conversation. Perhaps a conversation with oneself. And being mindful of what my own mindset is at times I am I cannot comment on some of the uses for St John's Wort. Except to say I found this to be
honest, witty and an exceptional write.

[Nisreen]

I read up on it. Apparently it's like weed and isn't harmful

Thank you so much for your review

[Ken Simm.]

Used for treating depression. It also has certain painkilling properties. Its medicinal properties have been know since medevial times and before probably. It was the first use I mentioned I was talking of and you are more than welcome.

[SleeplessVolcano]

aahhhh...now that is a mouthful of poetry which can be interpreted in....ummm.....61 different ways.....;)

First things first....you should be fined by the Poetry Association for ending a poem with the word "Fine".....geez....what were you thinking?....:D

A work of art. I said. Fine!

[Nisreen]

This isn't a poem
Its random
Stuff

[SleeplessVolcano]

Life can be random sometimes habibi......

[Nisreen]

I can't believe you just said Habibi lol. It should be Habibti
I am a girl

[Nisreen]

Can you believe the humidity today
What The .....