Moon Day

The softest rays came

Light gently touched your cheek

I wished

A simple moment to be

My fingers ran through your hair

While tender leaves touched 

The thought of you today

Running light of happiness

Blossoms the kindness of you

Roses grew the edge of imagination

A scent on your finger 

Every gentle note weightless in motion

Landing onto the pillow

As once counted words float

In pure silence

There you are

With a morning sun 

Open palms sat on cheeks

Filled with innocent light 

Guiding one that is lost

To hug the hours to come

Kneeling closer

I Love You 

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

Beautifully written in free-verses with simple choice of words... "guiding one that is lost to hug the hours to come. Well written, nice job.. Great work. thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

[Nisreen]

Thank you .............

[Karen]

There is so much beauty in this poem, a quiet romance that does is no less passionate despite its serenity. Beautifully written!

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Karen

[Lyn Anderson]

This poem has a lovely undercurrent, a quiet and intense thrum -- of love.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your words :)

[Cobblestone Traveler]

This is so beautiful! Deep, intense portrayal of passionate love. Most excellent.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..................... :)

[poetdoug]

"Guiding one that is lost to hug the hours to come"
Most captivating lines
Well done

[Nisreen]

Thank you for the support

[poetdoug]

You are most welcome my friend.

[Teddybearlee]

Very beautifully written, definitely brings out emotions.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kindness

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am a sucker for good romantic poetry, and this is not good... it is GREAT!! Love it.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much lol :)

[Tomás Ó C..]

Nice evocative love poem...

[Nisreen]

Thank you Tomas :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

perfect blend of metaphor and imagination...almost like emily dickinson might write of a fantasy love, she had many....


i really like the line "To hug the hours to come"

my imagination took a trip there...and i didn't want to let go of the hug.

j.

[Nisreen]

That's a very sweet review ..... thanks .....