Evergreen Reality

Expanding this taken conduct

Legions to still waters

Tenderness sprout

Endowed is the heart

Gathering stars of love

Awakening candle of care

Creasing a golden fountain 

Left to ponder a thought

From madness to release

Motioning pastorals of self governance

Beats went on delivering

A moment to the spur  openness

Yet indifference could never take plight 

Hands moving on waves of your heart

Listening to the world with eyes

Deliverance of yet another day

In all fields

No tears would flood the path

Simply wiping the delicate skin

Never missed

A million signs

Seldom misread

From expectations

To a pass through

Self gratitude 

Months turn to years

Given the death of nerving fear

Within a piece of memory 

Grown evergreen 

Reviews

[Ruth]

Amazing imagery...a wonderment to meander through this :)

[Nisreen]

Thanks Poppy :)

[Spencer Barker]

Curiosity, you have a true talent weaving together the words necessary to describe life, love, and true emotion. This poem demonstrates much of this and more. Excellent job once again!

-Spencer

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dear Spencer

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful descriptions, Curiosity, good poem. :) Rudi

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Rudi

[JayG]

To me? It reads like something Chance the Gardner would say—meaning to be supplied by the observer.

[Nisreen]

Who could ask for me ..... that's perfect ..... thank you Jay

[wordman]

creation at it`s best,lovely imagery

[Nisreen]

Thank you Word man :)

[andrew mitchell]

we at peace with nature when you witness its beauty. had a few interpretations on reading like you do but this one was for me. a splendid write curiosity.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Andrew

[GalaxyGhost]

This quite a poem full of fresh air like hiking up a mountain. I enjoyed it! In the line: "A moment to the spur openness", there is an extra space between 'spur' and 'openness'. That't the only error I saw. Other than that, I liked the poem!

[Nisreen]

Thank you I shall take care of that

[Annie Nicole]

Oh my goodness, this is truly written amazingly. So vivid and real. Thanks for sharing with us!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Annie ...... this review is a big boost for my soul

[William Liston]

Wow. There's not much else I can say. This is breath-taking. I loved it.

-William Liston

[Nisreen]

Thank you For That :)

[Phillip Francis]

This had some great imagery. Nice work

[Nisreen]

Thank You Phillip