Provoking Innocence

The shortest distance

 Accross vastness 

 Ignited glimpses 

Abreast a flare

 Tighter light

 Dabs a soul 

Paved drawings

 Of The deep ocean 

Color set in song 

Lilac teals of You

 Softest blue

 Rivers of flooding note

Embrace a physical existence 

Cheek full garden 

A botanical angel

 Pours Inscribed pathways

 Knockîng in joy  

The dawn strings of morning

 Guiding skin to réflect

 On a soul mirror 

Asking walls to fall 

Pilots flew through thought 

Roses placed by The door 

 Dancing in petal red

 Overpowerîng grasp of air 

 Breaths out  

Coming at  innocence 

 Sleeping in an abode 

Crafting your bare hands 

Pairing up with innocence 

Reviews

[Hyacinth]

Flawless, as always. Keep it up.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much

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Such a lovely brush of organic nature, this love :) I love the original voice of it's expression

[Nisreen]

Thank you Lynn

[andrew mitchell]

I'm at loss with this poem cos its me not grasping this write. I'm not sure where I am after reading this journey Nisreen. sorry Nis

[Nisreen]

Its ok
i guess i am back lol

Thank you anyways Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

i'm just thick nisreen

[Nisreen]

Or i am too thin minded lol

[andrew mitchell]

anyway others have got it so that is good, just not me but thats on a regular basis with me deciphering sometimes.

[Nisreen]

yes its ok it happens
i am wrote of love
and how it provokes innocence in the soul
read moreyes its ok it happens
i am wrote of love
and how it provokes innocence in the soul
just with alot of detail

[andrew mitchell]

sorry i did not get it lol

[Nisreen]

its ok ...... :P

[KWP]

ah it must be an Aussie thing as I too found it hard to grasp the thread that seems to constantly change ...

You have beautiful phrases but to what you are alluding escapes me ...

[Nisreen]

It happens alot .... I guess my style of writing could be hard to décipher

[wordman]

another great story weaved through your mind,for the reader to unwind ...

[Nisreen]

Thank you Wordman

[JayG]

Perhaps in your mind there's a relationship, and a flow of ideas, but without your intent driving it, quite frankly, reads like the output of an online poetry generator.

Sorry, but that's how it hit me.

[Nisreen]

There is drive
But you can say that motion picks up ...... accelerates
Thank you

[Richard Patrick]

Fantasic, I found the peom very illuminating. Great story you have written.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard :)

[JBoone]

Beautiful. This is amazing. You are a truely gifted writer.

[Nisreen]

Well that's more than I deserve .... thank you

[Joshua Haines]

I. Am lost for words. This poem is just wonderful to read. Well done keep it up

[Nisreen]

That's a really nice review to read ....... touching. ... thank you

[Ruth]

The brevity of the line structure here makes the poem a tangible piece to grasp and meander through and over, beautiful...

[Nisreen]

Thank You Poppy

[Mayank]

When we are closer to the nature, we are better than ever... I liked your thoughts, first thing I read in morning and I feel like tinkling positivism in me.

[Nisreen]

Well i am glad to read your review .... Thank You