Provoking Innocence

Provoking Innocence

A Poem by Nisreen





The shortest distance
 Accross vastness 

 Ignited glimpses 
Abreast a flare

 Tighter light
 Dabs a soul 

Paved drawings
 Of The deep ocean 

Color set in song 
Lilac teals of You

 Softest blue
 Rivers of flooding note

Embrace a physical existence 
Cheek full garden 

A botanical angel
 Pours Inscribed pathways

 Knockîng in joy  
The dawn strings of morning

 Guiding skin to réflect
 On a soul mirror 

Asking walls to fall 
Pilots flew through thought 

Roses placed by The door 
 Dancing in petal red

 Overpowerîng grasp of air 
 Breaths out  

Coming at  innocence 
 Sleeping in an abode 

Crafting your bare hands 
Pairing up with innocence 

© 2016 Nisreen


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Artwork and words. Amazing. The strong description create visions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Once again, a poem of lush images and with a soft flow of thoughts.

You have used some very original words throughout the piece and topped it off with a very lovely picture, as always.

Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Every line seems filled with both color and life, words as seeds growing in a garden of the mind and heart. The music is soft, smooth, and awakens the heart to the joy of this coming innocence. Beautiful. xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is beautiful... Is it a particular type of poem. It reminds me of couplets, except 1st and second do not rhyme. Just curious.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


A bit surrealistic in nature, but it drew me in. That artwork you chose to accompany your words is stunning. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia :)
I love the colors that dance in your words. What a talent you have!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
'Color set in song
Lilac teals of You'

Love this stanza!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Means Alot coming from you Emily
Knowing your taste in poetry
Thank you
You paint the picture very well! You have multiple kinds of symbols working in this poem and they all achieve your point. Great writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Spencer :)
so many wonderful lines for me ..but have to mention:
"Tighter light
Dabs a soul" and:

"Guiding skin to réflect
On a soul mirror'

just wonderful!!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you E ..... always enjoy reading your review
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

oh yes ..the flower pic is very sexy :)
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading this piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Stephanie

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Nisreen
Nisreen

United Arab Emirates



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