Rush

As lids decided to open up

For the first time in years

There was a rush

One moment followed by many

All started by one thought 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Ugh, is the sound I make when I am jealous I never thought the thought that sparked this. Where you capture in so few lines I would need a novel to capture even a fraction of it completeness. But the jealousy son diminishes, when I know I am defeated, and slink off with my claws clicking away and tail between my legs :)
So delicious it's making my tummy grumble :)

[Nisreen]

lol .... i heard that
and you rolled your eyes didnt you ??

[Lorry]

Yes, he says sheepishly :)

[Nisreen]

I Do that a lot
I don't notice i do

[Lorry]

Tuts and shaking head make up the top three :)

[Nisreen]

I see ..... tuts are the funniest ..... dunno if it's a sign of anger or disapproval .... if it all goes down the same anyways ....

[Lorry]

I know. Who needs sign language when we have tuts :)

[Nisreen]

Théy got to be the worst
Tuts and disapproving stares
Its like please stop ✋

[Gray]

I'm waiting for a flood of thoughts to come rushing in and begin a catalog of new poems an ideas. Someday...someday.

[Nisreen]

Mine has hit me today and I am writing Alot .....

[Gray]

Ride that river while you can. And may it be a long one.

[Nisreen]

Let's hope so ..... because writers block sucks ....

[Gray]

Yes, I'm aware of that wall many of us face.

[Nisreen]

I just thank god it went straight to hell ..... I feel so alive :)

[T.Y.N.P.]

Short and sweet. Nicely done. *applauds*

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your words of encouragement

[terry smith]

...& a breath of life touches your soul...

[Nisreen]

Thank you Terry ..... I hope all is well on your side of the world

[terry smith]

yes ..but i must admit I miss talking to you...

[Nisreen]

I miss talking to you too ..... how is work and life ?

[terry smith]

work is very busy & life...i have been doing a lot of drawing & you ?

[Nisreen]

Bust with my boys ..... and writing Alot offline ..... and reading

[terry smith]

are you still cooking ?

[Nisreen]

I am back home with my family now

[terry smith]

did you & your man get together ?

[Nisreen]

We didn't ..... I guess he doesn't want me .....

[Nisreen]

I don't really wanna talk about it ..... I wish you well ..... take care of yourself ..... cheers

[terry smith]

don't run I am sorry to bring it up..

[Papaya]

I like this, I interpret as understanding or truth...

[Nisreen]

The truth of a feeling
Always hits me in a rush ..... Thank you

[onceloved]

It only take that first step for many more to follow so few words that said so much. :) Larry

[Nisreen]

Hopefully alot of bravery
Thank You

[Lydia Shutter]

Suddenly an idea makes you feel alive...as if your eyes have opened for the first time. Good one. Lydi**

[Nisreen]

Precisely ..... What an insightful review !!!!

[Einstein Noodle]

isn't that just the way inspiration goes ..well said! simple, precise, and insightful ... all the things one loves in a poem ... no need to speed read nor overlook as "it will take too long" ...love it!
E.
i do wish you would stop changing your moniker ... i can't keep up with you ;)

[Nisreen]

Lol . Thanks E

[Einstein Noodle]

love to you my friend! :)

[Nisreen]

i love you too :)

[CD Campbell]

This poem was a nice thought provoking snapshot. It's funny how one instance can have such profound effect. I like this. CD

[Nisreen]

Thanks CD ....

[andrew mitchell]

fantastic nisreen i am enjoying your new direction, a short poem but with a punch! more profound, having that wisdom in so few lines.

[Nisreen]

Oh thank you very much my dear friend Andrew
How Is aussie treatin ya ??

[andrew mitchell]

its the second day of winter so its cold by aussie standards. work is beyond hectic. and everything else revolves around that. thanks for asking. i hope you are well from your eye op.

[Nisreen]

I am A ok now ..... winter waw ..... it's all sunny here and very hot in kuwait ..... and Ramadan is coming soon a very beautiful time of the year filled with happiness