Free of Doubt

A life of real hearts

Carrying the wind on sails of hope

A creation of pure imagination

The song of a world

Floating on the surface of reality

The lyrics to unforced choices

In the heart lies words

Sealed in the place of a let go

The paper boat was on the stream

Released to an air of gratitude

Gliding out into openness

Only wishes for a clear thought 

To be honest in love

A magnitude of will was on a role

Happiness with a mixture of dark

Sitting in the hands of flowers

Stars up above them 

Assuring the path of finding

Believing was very different 

Exotic in the ways it wrote

For scriptures were held 

in the most solemn of places

By a candlelight the sorrow

has learnt to flow out of this aura

Flying away to a petty sold

Reviews

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Hmmm. First of all, i love the picture! Characters of the imagination.....

Imagery is lovely as always. The message is a little obscured for me today. I didn't eat breakfast!

It seems to me to be about the shedding of doubts, letting the soul go free of sorrow and all things that darken the pathway to happiness. Like Dan, this one has me a little stumped. Only you know the true meaning behind it.

[FaeryQueen]

Great work!!
Love the imagery!!!
Can't wait to read more of your work!!!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Khatoon. ......

[Spencer Barker]

Curiosity, you have multiple places that this poem can allow you to travel. This piece is both vivid and dreamy. Excellent work!

[Nisreen]

Thank You Spencer

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem. Honest and good wisdom.
"To be honest in love
A magnitude of will was on a role

Happiness with a mixture of dark
Sitting in the hands of flowers"
The above line are true and wonderful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my my my! i read this as all about feeling, revealing and writing down that bugger of a poem that has been the grain of irritation creating the pearl ... could be way off .. but thats what is see on first reading ..love the pic .. had to stare at it for a bit before i read ;) don't want to miss something you know ;) lots of intriguing and creative lines but that fourth couplet seems to be the "turn" .. i like the way you say it!
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank You E

[Philip Muls]

Imaginative wording and strong imagery.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Philip

[A.marie.speaks]

for some reason this one reminds me of books, of all the stories I love to read and escape into. The ones that I connect to and become part of my being.. anyways even if that was not your intentions here, it is a great write with your hallmark imagery that I always enjoy. :) love the "happiness with a mixture of dark" line. ingenious.

[Nisreen]

Thank You so muc

[Nisreen]

*much

[andrew mitchell]

This read like a carnival of sorts. lovely poetic imagery. A magical mystery tour!

[Nisreen]

Thanks Andrew

[Richard Patrick]

The world that we live in is filled with imagination. Your world and beliefs is true to know that this had occurred for our benefit. It is beautiful written, I thank you for the information, that you are presented to us. It was well done, by it.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Richard

[dan]

Curiosity, I am afraid that I had a bit of trouble following this piece. Working with couplet following couplet is difficult (I've tried it and can't do it) because while it is fairly easy (and inspired) to write a single beautiful couplet it takes great skill to weave them all into a cohesive unit. You HAVE that skill...I've seen it in some of your other writes...but I'm afraid with this piece I can't see the forest for the trees.
A beautifully creative idea but a bit broken. Please take this as constructive criticism because I have become a fan of your work. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Well ofcourse i do ..... we are friends
Thank you ..... i will look it over