The judgmental

In the blink of an eye

Stood a ten fold bunch

Looking at the landscape

Clearing fields of purity

Speaking words of many lies

Claiming to be wiser than the rest

At the distance stood an ode

To fill a known space of knowing 

A guitar hooked to a string of flowers

Breaking away with tradition

An oath to a secret code 

Caring for the song to remain

Out of the darkened corners

A sky of blue will hold faith

Thinking the time has come to an end

We speak of the battle of proof

A beauty of complete callings

To grow a path of serene tides

Boats have sailed the Atlantic

Cruising the out shores of your mind

Something heard left untouched

By the somber closings of learning 

Taught 

Author's Note

Reviews

[dan]

BTW, Where do you find these masterpiece graphics? The graphic sets the stage for the treat ahead. take care...dan

[dan]

Curiosity, This piece is simply outstanding! You never specifically identify who is being judged or who is doing the judging, but you set the scene masterfully of human entities trying to get all of their ducks in a row for the forthcoming judgements.
Each couplet leads into the next with guitar strings picking a song of cohesion, an instrumental segue into the next chord. This forges a strong bond with all couplets standing tall...strengthening the write immeasurably.
I seldom quote from poems when I review but this line stands out like a beacon: "A guitar hooked to a string of flowers , Breaking away with tradition." Breathtaking!
I hope you don't mind if I save this to my library favorites. I thank you for sharing this piece with all of us. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Dan ... the images are off google .... i have a bit of an art addiction so any artist i love .... i just pretty much google my life away ;)

[dan]

Well, I hope that you realize that this is a masterpiece, young (lady or man...don't know). Treasure it and share with others. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Its Nisreen lol
Thank you Dan :)

[dan]

Wow, Nisreen! You keep changing identities like a superhero. Here all this time I thought that this curiosity person had stolen your style. Now I fee pretty dumb. But this piece IS (in my opinion) one of your very best!!! take care...dan

[Nisreen]

I am being the wicked one .... hiding lol

Thank you for this ego boost :)

[BL]

Nice one, some great lines in here, the first lines are strong

[Nisreen]

Thank you Be

[Emily]

Great first line!
Loved it!
Keep on writing!!

[Nisreen]

Thanks Emily

[wordman]

took me on a journey ! great imagery

[Nisreen]

Thank you wordman :)

[hcarson]

another excellent piece of work, well done, you are very talented :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind words

[Ria Carol]

Absolutely marvellous piece of work:)

[Nisreen]

More than i deserve
thank you

[Ria Carol]

You deserve all the best things trust me:)

[Nisreen]

Waw I wish you all the blessings there could be :)

[Ria Carol]

Thank you ..you are very kind :)