The judgmental

In the blink of an eye

Stood a ten fold bunch

Looking at the landscape

Clearing fields of purity

Speaking words of many lies

Claiming to be wiser than the rest

At the distance stood an ode

To fill a known space of knowing 

A guitar hooked to a string of flowers

Breaking away with tradition

An oath to a secret code 

Caring for the song to remain

Out of the darkened corners

A sky of blue will hold faith

Thinking the time has come to an end

We speak of the battle of proof

A beauty of complete callings

To grow a path of serene tides

Boats have sailed the Atlantic

Cruising the out shores of your mind

Something heard left untouched

By the somber closings of learning 

Taught 

Author's Note

Reviews

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As always your poem flows on a sea of images, wave after wave of words that crash upon the shores of the mind upon completing a read of it.

This is a very artistic piece of writing, embedded with images of the arts and the beauty they evoke, poetry, music, song. The underlying theme of living under the pretense of wisdom is evident and intimately referred to throughout the poem.

As always, very well written and delicate in its touch on the mind. Nice work.

[Bacchus]

claiming to be wiser than the rest...
how true that line is.

a certain line in the string of images

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..... i guess the truly wise are not even aware they are wise

[FaeryQueen]

Great work!!
Love the imagery!!!
Can't wait to read more of your work!!!!

[Nisreen]

Thank for your kind review

[Einstein Noodle]

Monet and Van Gogh are my favorite painters ... same with the music .. wonderful choices ..your poem is also very impressionistic ..one has to "let go" the mind and enjoy the ride ..the sense of deeper meaning is strong and demands i read it several times ...i enjoy your use of the language and the marvelous positive images you conjure
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you E.

[Ruth]

Stunning imagery and an amazing in-depth poem...I read twice to absorb its tones because it has an energy that is inspiring and heartfelt...wonderful...blessings...

[Nisreen]

Thank you Poppy

[Richard Patrick]

The peom is very soft and delicate as the breeze in the trees. It speaks of a time, when things have begun anew.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Richard

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry and good song. Leonard Cohen been one of muses for writing since 1976. I saw him in concern in Germany twice. In 1978 and 1979. Thank you for sharing your good words and the good song.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

To Think what one Man çan do With a Spark Of positivity
Mâkes one Think
Thank You C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. We need positive people to show us. Enjoy life and have fun. You are welcome.

[Mayank]

Beautifully written, the layers are enchanting like a folk tale.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Mayank

[A.marie.speaks]

Imagery is on point in your work. I read it twice because I feel like there's the outward beauty in the words but also an underlying message of ignoring those watch in from the shore and taking on your own journey on your own ocean. Lovely job!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for this lovely review

[Hannah Grace]

Beautiful. I really enjoyed this. They get better and better! :D

[Nisreen]

Thank you Hannah :)