Truly Happy Moments

My fingers touch

our book

Something slides off the table

once again

A piece of me

lies in your hands

Searching for a present moment

I suddenly realize

Tomorrow no longer exits

Yesterday vanishes

Wounds magically seal

Sultry waves

hint at you 

Thinking of you

Candles lit by a song

Hope becomes a way

Tulips sprouting 

in colors sublime

Seasons come along

In this never ending moment

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

"exits" I think you meant "Exists"


I love the first two lines; I felt a breeze, I dunno if it's just me... I felt a good breeze.

Love the picture that went along with this, exemplifies so much.

[Nisreen]

Thank you very much for your visit

[Hannah Grace]

beautiful. keep it up!!XD

[Nisreen]

Thank you ............

[Emily]

Beautiful poem.
Love the start of it!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily :)

[outspoken1234]

beautifully done. Thank you for letting review your poem.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Inject Positivity]

So peaceful and heartwarming... I really liked the way you have injected an everlasting feel for the reader... A moment which we all expect in our life... Such a beautiful work my frnd... Simple yet very sweetly done... Takes the reader to a world of peace and love...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Nisreen]

Thank you Shuman

[wordman]

as i read your book we are one,i am in you

[Nisreen]

Thank you Word man

[Ana B.]

I see what you mean about the tulips :D A beautiful serenity you have bestowed upon the reader. Lovely done C !

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dear Ana ..... You look quite beautiful in the picture :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you, exploring the north american continent nowadays :)

[Nisreen]

You mean Canada ...... You must visit Quebec .... it is a little heaven

[Ana B.]

Perhaps some day, my dream is to visit Japan :)

[Nisreen]

Oh you should watch The mind of a chef with David Chang
Makes you feel like Japan is the heaven of food

[andrew mitchell]

A landscape of colours in this smooth write so similar to another fine writer on this site Nisreen. Well done curiosity!

[Nisreen]

Its Nisreen undercover ..... Curiosity is protecting Nisreen for now ..... thank you andrew

[andrew mitchell]

You can't hide your style is your signature lol I pick you all the time lol:) At least you are warm undercover!!!!!!;)

[Nisreen]

lol ...... thank god i am not a cold one ..... mean and unkind .... maybe i should try that lol
read morelol ...... thank god i am not a cold one ..... mean and unkind .... maybe i should try that lol
i wouldnt last for an hour ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

let's stay on this page for awhile and savor these words, and the feelings that ensue from reading this poem...we let moments like this go too easily, too fast...and move on to darker moments like we embrace them...

i think this season needs more embracing...

lovely piece of writing....can't believe there are no reviews yet on this...

j.

[Nisreen]

Yours is The first .... Thank You J