This one is especially good. I think It's my favorite of yours. I didn't have to work to understand it at all, which is nice sometimes. I like the idea of love as a never-ending moment.
how interesting!! love the pink! :) marvelous turn in your poem "Wounds magically seal" ...i am an optimist and cling to the magic of such things ... you give us the experience of letting go ..and realizing each eternal moment as sublime truth and beauty ..and i sense a hint of sensuality that is very well done ..enjoyed the read!
E.
Very good flow of thoughts.
"Sultry waves
hint at you
Thinking of you"
I liked the above lines. The poem tone was gentle but the poem held great meaning. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
the love of one,that is beautiful, love the one who loves you, allow the summer winds to warm thy heart,may the flowers always grow, to speak of the love, that is yours, may it always be, within your heart, the love of beauty. May it always be there with thee,
Happiness and contentment found in the many rare moments of our existance. Hope springs, tomorrow becomes today, the past and all its hurts vanishes into thin air.
There is a real sweetness and enchanted happiness flowing through this poem, words of hope for the days to come.
Nice work, as always, Nisreen.
This has the sweetest, most tender light that lifts the soul into this wondrous spring. There is love in the song, and the season enhances the beauty of these moments.
Yes "Seasons come along, In this never ending moment". I can hardly type it's so cold here. Thank you for sharing your work with the world. I enjoyed the imagery.