The lights go out
A Poem by
Nisreen
in the shiniest veil
of a tender night
We all go down
just the same
the struggling father
after a long day
the youthful woman
staring a peace of mind
the lonely child
turning around in bed
the relocated family
finding warmth on a cold day
Your physician
fought cancer tonight
A teacher wrote
down his memories
The artist threw
a splash of paint
a George
that gave up Jane
All lights go out
just the same
The witty writer
puts down his pen
© 2016 Nisreen
Reviews
a beautiful description of a family on a normal day,loved the image
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your review
Okay, this one I understood. :)) Nicely done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Okay, this one I understood. :)) Nicely done.
once again a true piece of work. no matter who we are, where we are, our lives, cultures etc doesn't matter, when it comes to it, as you say, all the lights go out just the same. great work
Posted 8 Years Ago
once again a true piece of work. no matter who we are, where we are, our lives, cultures etc doesn't matter, when it comes to it, as you say, all the lights go out just the same. great work
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words
A quiet resignation to the natural order of things.
Lovely perspective, Nisreen.
High-level work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
A quiet resignation to the natural order of things.
Lovely perspective, Nisreen.
High-level work!
8 Years Ago
Thank you Frank
Nisreen, this is a true masterpiece. If I could, I would give this a 101 rating. You open your thoughts to all of us. You make apparent the struggles we all go through in our lives, and it is that you craft it beautifully. My favorite work; truly excellent again! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
Nisreen, this is a true masterpiece. If I could, I would give this a 101 rating. You open your thoughts to all of us. You make apparent the struggles we all go through in our lives, and it is that you craft it beautifully. My favorite work; truly excellent again! :)
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much Spencer .........
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Added on May 7, 2016
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Nisreen United Arab Emirates
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