A beautiful church

Soft drops of rain

descending

a heavenly sky

touched my fingers 

during day

a door made 

of the oldest wood

lit candles

glass painted windows 

the calm bench

only with my thoughts

a prayer

At the Notre Dame 

Reviews

[Bacchus]

the door
the bench
the windows
and candles... and we are there

i try to make it to a big Catholic church every year to get a different reverent
approach to God that isn't found in as many Protestant churches...
reminded me I need to go...

[Nisreen]

i am not christian ..,... but just being in there
so much peace
a house of god
they all feel the same
thanks for your words

[Philip Muls]

A graceful poem, fit for the chosen location. The calm bench...very powerful.

Well done.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Philip

[An owl on the moon]

You write with such an uplifting, sacred light, and everything lifts us into this beautiful place. So well done.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ........

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Notre Dame de Paris?!!

What a place! What a church! A beautiful building and a place of such quiet reflection and harmony.
A trip down memory lane across a crowded square and into the bowels of this place of heavenly solitude.

Very nice writing, as always Nisreen.

[Nisreen]

There is one in Quebec Montreal and it is truly gorgeous .... thank you for your words :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Aahh....this poem took me on a trip down memory lane to a little chapel in a forest......will share my thoughts and a pic of that chapel in my next poem.....

That peace is quite out of this world. Well put.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..... I look forward to reading yours

[FaeryQueen]

I think this poem is filled with passion... this feels very echo-ey, like I'm in a tunnel... the way you made me feel the rain on my fingertips and then that bench i was sitting in momentarily, i heard whispers, nothing solid, just aberrations. very great poetry!!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind words

[Inject Positivity]

Heartwarming, the scene of church is a lovely thing to me... The serenity, peace and inspiration it provides is just unbelievable, and when the church is old then it becomes little of interesting and encouraging... Lovely write frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Nisreen]

Thank you .................

[andrew mitchell]

Very french this place of worship. well done Nisreen.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Andrew

[hcarson]

i love old churches..old buildings in general really but there is something extra nice about a church, even though iam not actually religious. well done on this good job :)

[Nisreen]

Thank You .......

[wordman]

a place of refuge,a place of peace,a place where we talk about all our needs
and the catholic holds a mystic kind of refuge

[Nisreen]

Thank You for your review