A beautiful church

Soft drops of rain

descending

a heavenly sky

touched my fingers 

during day

a door made 

of the oldest wood

lit candles

glass painted windows 

the calm bench

only with my thoughts

a prayer

At the Notre Dame 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I loved visiting a place i can only dream of experiencing through what felt like a simple, slow lovely walk through a beautiful church!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Kathy :)

[Emily]

Nice imagery! Beautifully created scenes that comes together nicely at the end of the poem.

[Nisreen]

Thanks Dear Emily

[dan]

Nisreen, Even without a title or the mention of Notre Dame the symbolism is strong, the imagery pointing to a picture of a cathedral-like church. The piece exudes a feeling of tranquility and a calming touch. You are so in tune with the subjects about which you write. My greatest compliments. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Thank You Dear Dan

[Richard Patrick]

the peom is very goos, it suggests the tranquility of the church. The place that is safe and beautiful THANK YOU FOR ALLOWING ME, TO READ IT.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your enthusiastic review :)

[SmittyJas]

Tenderness and caring write a Roman Catholic's Delight.

[Nisreen]

Thank Smitty

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. In so few words. Took the reader to a beautiful place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank You C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Henrietta Watson]

I like this poem alot and it inspired me to writing something about a church.

[Nisreen]

Thank You for your kind words

[Einstein Noodle]

its the bench that catches my attention the most ..the calm bench ..i know just what you mean and it conjures an aged history filled with stories of everyday people ... in the calm of their prayer ... (the real Church eh!?) ... and who would not be in awe of Notre Dame ... your poem draws me in so sweetly ...your closing is powerful soft somehow for me ..nice one!
E.

[Nisreen]

Its the Notre dame of Quebec
I did feel so much peace in there ..... thank you E

[outspoken1234]

It is very well written. I did enjoy it very much

[Nisreen]

Thank You :)

[outspoken1234]

you are very welcome

[Emily]

Loved this!!
One of my favorites of yours!
Keep on writing!

[Nisreen]

Thank You .......