Rainbow

Gorgeous rhythm 

Colored halls 

Looking into the eyes

of experience

Love for excitement

Creating live light

The beacon of breathing

Hopefully enhanced

To live out a spark

Sitting on the edge of dreams

Picturing the green

A gallery of minds 

Gather to read

Open to seeing

The work so rad 

Believing in more than film

A song of a child

Refusing to grow up

A string spring

Landing no paying job

Filled with a form

Living through 

Until a day of departure

No doubt took the seat

A wheel of bliss

Rolling away

from mud 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I like this nisreen but as always there is more to a rainbow. A poem to delve deep!

[Nisreen]

Thank You Andrew

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I love rainbows, Nisreen, they are a sign of hope and good future. Well done. :) Rudi

[Nisreen]

Thank You Rudi

[Annie Nicole]

I love how you use little words to tell such a story!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Annie

[hcarson]

Very vivid and interesting, lively,good job

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[Henrietta Watson]

A very creative and interesting poem.

[Nisreen]

thank you
i am in a good mood :)

[Emily]

Great poem!
Lovely wording!!
Keep on writing!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i relate to this...living much of my life one paycheck away from the mud of the dirty streets....but loving the experience of , in a sense, never growing up...reminds me of a song by Melanie..."my rainbow race"
she sings "it's too soon to die"

no regrets.

[Nisreen]

Thank you J
love this review

[Spencer Barker]

Nisreen, you instill many elements in this write and it flows very nicely. From colors of bright to the darkness, you lay out what differences you may see or experience beautifully. Nice job!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Spencer

[FaeryQueen]

this lulled me to peaceful dreams, love it! keep it up

[Nisreen]

Thank you ................

[wordman]

nisreen,you have painted some vivid images here,i liked the opening line

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)