Rainbow

Gorgeous rhythm 

Colored halls 

Looking into the eyes

of experience

Love for excitement

Creating live light

The beacon of breathing

Hopefully enhanced

To live out a spark

Sitting on the edge of dreams

Picturing the green

A gallery of minds 

Gather to read

Open to seeing

The work so rad 

Believing in more than film

A song of a child

Refusing to grow up

A string spring

Landing no paying job

Filled with a form

Living through 

Until a day of departure

No doubt took the seat

A wheel of bliss

Rolling away

from mud 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

how interesting ..i am enamored in reading ..thoughts and feelings of fanciful dreams and aspirations colors .. your closing totally surprised me ..tho it fits and has a powerful impact ..i did not see a life stuck until that point .. great job says i! love the images and the rolling away at the end ..better times are just up ahead!
E.

[Richard Patrick]

We refuse to give up on our dream of being a child. We all have our fantasies don't we. The dream of peace that is before us all.It is very well crafted. I thank you for writing this.

[Nisreen]

Thank You for your wonderful review

[Bigdreams]

This was so good :)!!!!!!!!

[Nisreen]

Thank You :)

[dan]

Nisreen, I really like the deviation you now employ in the shaping of your poetic structure, now allowing stand-alone single lines that capture the attention like an exclamation point. Your style emphasizes differences in each couplet that can be a metaphor for the disparate colors in a rainbow. I have difficulty providing quotes from the piece in my reviews because I'm a firm believer that your pieces are most effective when judges as a WHOLE entity, not the sum of its parts.
Excellent work as is your usual. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Thank You Dan

[SmittyJas]

Loving of the joyful moments of two written so well such lines can tell

[Nisreen]

Thank you Smitty

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the hopeful poetry.
"Sitting on the edge of dreams
Picturing the green"
The above lines were my favorite. liked the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[outspoken1234]

Very wonderful. Thank you for sharing it.

[Nisreen]

Thanks for your review :)

[outspoken1234]

It was my pleasure

[Henrietta Watson]

A very creative poem and moving.

[Nisreen]

Well thank you ..... that's an uplifting review

[.]

Hmmm. This is a tough one.......*scratches his head*

A rainbow.....? This reads like an artistic expression....i am feeling the references to art in life, in its many forms, a kaleidoscope, a rainbow of colours and expressions. Life as art, art as life, life as the colours of the rainbow, a different colour for a different stage of life's journey. I might be well off on this one!
A very thought-provoking poem, Nisreen. Mindbending once again, yet as always beautifully written and flowing like a dream.

[Nisreen]

You are actually reading right into me ..... thank you

[.]

Eureka!! Got it in one!! Hahaha.

[Nisreen]

Lol I haven't heard someone say Eureka in some time lol

[.]

Not since the Goldrush days in my country! No idea how i have it in my vocabulary......smh.

[Nisreen]

I use it too and people look at me like what is that ..... a game lol .....

[MOON]

A kaleidoscope of colour and commentary on life , lovely write.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Moon