The love in Hiding

The nurse who carried 

a patient to a chair

The teacher that stayed up

all night

The doctor that prayed

before touching your broken hand

The waiter that sent 

extras to your table

The son that drew

you in school

The chef that blessed

your bowl of soup

The engineer that persevered 

your right to ride safely

The housekeeper

that left a mint on your pillow

The paper boy

that aimed right 

The team players

that raised your flags high

The bird that

sang by your window tonight

The man who wrote

so you can read

The woman who loved you

so you can fly 

Those who gave up

so you can have some fun

The unborn

writing your future nights 

Reviews

[highonwords]

wow - this is a beautiful poem with a very positive message - universal love - i love this subject very much, not just in theory, but in tangible actions - great message, great write :)

regards,
steph

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[highonwords]

you're welcome, my friend :)

steph

[Nisreen]

Hope you are having a beautiful morning :)

[highonwords]

oh, it's evening here, almost 9 pm - thank you for the thought :)

steph

[Nisreen]

well ..... i hope you have a good night :)

[Richard Patrick]

it is very neat the blessings that you have given to the reader. I found it was very well done. The discussion of what you spoke of is true. The simplist of things are also the greatest of gifts that you have done this.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard

[Spencer Barker]

Wow, this is truly very impressive! This writing really stresses to the reader what we may take for granted of others, and what others do for another. Nice job, RiverSided!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Spencer

[andrew mitchell]

Its the little things that count done out of love or just a good heart that are remembered as big things later. Maybe a typo with the title Hiding instead of hidding. A nice right and this review will cost you two chocolate eggs.

[Nisreen]

lol ............ i had so much chocolate ......... happy easter

[andrew mitchell]

happy easter nisreen

[Nisreen]

its so beautiful out here in Montreal ........ Church Belles in the morning and people here are all out for food and dancing .......... its 13 degrees ......... just gorgeous

[andrew mitchell]

i love montreal and quebec with cobblestone lanes

[Nisreen]

The food .... music ......... is life ........ everyone is so chilled ......... i love this city

[hcarson]

wow..loved this one, so simple and true, gets inside your head really and makes you think of all the people that affect areas of your dy that get no recognition or gratitude..will think a lot more in future thanks to you..full marks...perfect!

[Nisreen]

thanks ..................

[wordman]

and the wordman ,that places himself into your life, and writes about them ! lol
this is a great tribute to the good and thoughtful things in life

[Nisreen]

thanks ..................

[Emily]

Awesome poem!
Makes me think.
Keep on writing!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

There are so many who bless our lives...many in ways we may never know of. I love this! It sings of gratitude and kindness. The last lines are amazing...who and when will they be.

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is the most significant poem i have read from you yet...and i have read many...

all of those unborn...the ones to write our future nights...what kind of world will they come into...and will they all be able to do these wonderful things....i worry about 10 years from now...life is getting so dangerous and complicated.

great piece.

[Nisreen]

Thank you J