Kill an idol

Gathering some laws of geometry 

in the conquest

The authors

creating water on wills

Symphonies

of the deaf

None offended

by the signs 

left on the door

The doctors inventing

the cure

in a pill

Side effected by the first engine

created

by the sheer force

Apples that fell

far away from trees

The smoking groundwork

of another film

Plotting the avenge

of dog hunts

The queen bee

lays on the comb

Another determinant implanting

places with thought

Adventures

for the run

The wrangler strapped 

with weapons

of survival  

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I honestly don't know what this is about or what message is being conveyed. There are parts of this poem that draw word pictures of real life & parts that seem drawn from a movie set. There are some interesting & cleverly-crafted phrases thru-out, thought-provoking, but not exactly providing clarity. My very favorite phrase (which stands out for me, way beyond everything else): "Apples that fell far away from trees" . . . reminding me of the all-too-frequent estrangements between parents & children.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ...............................

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely watch on what's happening around you.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Andrew

[Richard Patrick]

very well crafted, I found it is very true, writing about the things that have been done..

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dear Richard

[FaeryQueen]

wonderful write, thanks for sharing

[Nisreen]

Thank you ...........................

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
I really like the ending!
Keep it up!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words my friend.in a pill
"Side effected by the first engine
created"
It does seem. For very good, there is a negative. Progress had done more damage than good? Thank you for sharing the powerful poetry. You left something for the reader to think about.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C .................

[wordman]

you are wise beyond your young years !

[Nisreen]

thank you ..............

[hcarson]

i like this..i got scared when i saw the word geometry lol...thought oh please god no!! he listened and the rest of the words were just perfect, well done ;)

[Nisreen]

thank you ..................