Kill an idol

Gathering some laws of geometry 

in the conquest

The authors

creating water on wills

Symphonies

of the deaf

None offended

by the signs 

left on the door

The doctors inventing

the cure

in a pill

Side effected by the first engine

created

by the sheer force

Apples that fell

far away from trees

The smoking groundwork

of another film

Plotting the avenge

of dog hunts

The queen bee

lays on the comb

Another determinant implanting

places with thought

Adventures

for the run

The wrangler strapped 

with weapons

of survival  

Reviews

[Insight "MH"]

I feel this writing contains many worlds and we just got glimpses of them. I am fascinated by this one Nisreen.

[Nisreen]

Thanks Insight

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome ^_^

[.]

Wow. This is very deep.

I am drawn to the idea of a hunt, a search for something, the pursuit of something or other that should be left untouched. Images to me that illicit a sense of quiet anger at our pursuit and attempts to conquer all in our midst. Instead of leaving things as they are, we as humans, meddle, probe, prod, and dissect every part of our world in an attempt to conquer a need, a desire.
A very thought-provoking write, Nisreen. Lovely thoughts and images and certainly a poem to test our dark matter!

[Nisreen]

I guess that probing happens when one is looking for someone to look up to ..... no world existed without a sun. ... thanks for your review

[Sunrising]

I love it... you composed it as a song... The ideas and ways of expressions are nice... thanks for sharing...
:-)

Best
Sun

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind review

[Sunrising]

my pleasure..... and you are welcome....... :)

[Elma]

I like the way the lines connect in their deconstruction.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Elma

[Bacchus]

placebos of a certain kind.
crazy good read.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ;)

[Annie Nicole]

I love your poem's structure and it also has great wording, nice job!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Annie

[K.Butler]

Very interesting! The lines make you think of their meaning. The way you made the lines separate and how you spaced things added pauses, making the reader read it in a certain way, showing how the reader should read it

[Nisreen]

Thank you ;)

[Amberlilies]

Thanks for the read invite! Interesting word play here. This is my favorite line:

"The authors
creating water on wills"

[Nisreen]

Thank you .....................

[Einstein Noodle]

welcome back Nisreen ..this is the you that i know!!! :) love your direct ambiguity ..the social conscience barbs stuck just so ... smart word play ..fantastic pic ..really sets the contrast of earths degradation .. these lines for me are the pivot point:
"Side effected by the first engine
created"

keep em coming young lady!
E.

[Nisreen]

Thanks E ......

[Glen Weimann]

Sorry Nisreen. I'm with barleygirl in having no idea what this is about. However, I quite enjoy the flow of words in a phonetic sense.

[Nisreen]

Thank you .....................