Calm Strings

Upheld with no religious

doctrines 

common initiative

took precedence 

willing agreement

on a floating

rose

certainly humble

by ties 

of 

good deeds

many eyes went to sleep

awakened

by

a golden sunshine

reflecting white

so much light

the average eye

oversees

the comfort of others

birds sing

tunes of peace

this is

Utopia 

the link has been

common belief 

in 

good

an agreement 

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

loved the ending, great finish!

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..................

[Emily]

I like the way you ended it!
Lovely poem!!
Keep it up!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..........................................

[wordman]

and good will carry you through ! good deeds and good works are a great start
but somewhere down the line you must commit to a higher power

[Nisreen]

Thank you .......................................

[hcarson]

ahhh....utopia...if only....lovely words

[Nisreen]

thank you .................

[Bacchus]

I think you could stop at utopia
Because you bring us there with the words before it.

[Nisreen]

Thank you .......................

[andrew mitchell]

i think i like this place utopia. a nice calm, serene( nisreen) write!!!!

[Nisreen]

Finally i calmed the hell down lol ...... thanks andrew

[charlie]

Seems a very reasonable expectation, expressed with gentleness and beauty.

[Nisreen]

Thanks ................