Absolution

In some form of absolution

here comes the rain

following the tracks 

a hopeful storm

of clear snow

unsold 

never to follow

the none existence render

saving the soul

of the dark

seeing a castle in the sand

from a distance 

the waters of 

speaking life

in the grazed fields

found a new tradition

embracing the change

reaching for light

a taste in purity

mouthful lips in words

unspoken

the lifting of clouded nights

refusing a fall

above a drop of rain 

The weeds 

revolting 

a new form of living

blossoming through spring

Reviews

[...]

Thoughts are clouds in the open sky of pure awareness...we are sky-born condensation :)
I find this quite beautiful. You don't mind if I keep it, do you :) Not really a question lol

[Nisreen]

be my guest :) thank you

[Spencer Barker]

This truly is a beautiful write, RiverSided. It is everything that is good and true. Superb writing!

[Nisreen]

thank you Spencer

[. serah .]

-- hmmm... such a beautiful journey of renewal... a kind of rebirth in "a new form of living"... and i loved the expression "the waters of speaking life"... stunning imagery and portrayal...

[Nisreen]

thanks serah :)

[. serah .]

-- my privilege... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the imagery here...the idea of us losing one self to the rain, but growing another, new and better self because of it...getting rid of those clouds...but we must survive the storms first...then it clears...the winter clears and we warm up to life once more.

[Nisreen]

you read me so well jacob

[hcarson]

Got some but not all of this but i'm medicated to eyeballs so may not be helping lol, i liked the use of words even though i didnt quite grasp the intention behind them..sort of feeling i got from it was stress and a wish to be rid of something thats plaguing someone intensly but as i say thinkung straight isn' t my forte right now, still, i enjoyed it, as i dovall your work :)

[Nisreen]

thank you ..........................

[Richard Patrick]

absolution, to clear away sins. The hope and dream of peace, forever. The one thing we do not truly understand its meaning of. The hope, that we will have absolved ourselves of sin, is this reality or whimsy/

[Nisreen]

it is very real
only its done internally
thanks richard