Free Will: A matter of Choice

Free Will: A matter of Choice

A Poem by Nisreen

Man has been liberated 
by choice

To freely choose
A path of life

unlike many other creatures
that live 

We think
An acoustic sound

Skies filled with souls
The choices

Worrying for nothing
Burning outer space

A human race
striking many matches

in desolation

raising them into a fire
of will

reaching the heights of human
Skies

The beauty of 
remembrance

Calling out for 
peaceful resolutions

Raising a glass
of life

Something runs wild
into a character filled dream

like the age old tree
marking the years

in wider circles
filling the scope of humanity

© 2016 Nisreen


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Nisreen

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It is an excellent piece, the poem resonates a lot of love and the hope thae we all live on this ball of water and earth together.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

thanks ................
RiverSided, this writing lends many wonderful scenes to the reader as well as showing the greatness of humanity. Excellent!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thanks Spencer
This really is a great poem! It shows that humans are creatures that can be so powerful on their own without everything else that we get from society. Loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

thanks Annie
"Skies filled with souls
The choices
Worrying for nothing
Burning outer space
A human race
striking many matches
in desolation
raising them into a fire
of will"

Truth. I absolutely love your tree ring image.. stunning ideas in this piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thanks ..........................
-- hmmm... we can choose many things... but we don't choose the violence/abuse that comes our way... -- that is a choice that someone else makes and we suffer...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

true ........................
. serah .

8 Years Ago

-- hmmm...
Great poem!
Keep up the great work!!'

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you .......................
SO CORRECT..WE HAVE THE CHOICE BUT SO OFTEN MAKE THE WRONG ONES, WAR,POLLUTION . LOVELY POEM AND EXPRESSIVE WORDING...SORRY ABOUT THE CAPITAL LETTERS..BUTTON HAVING ISSUES :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

its ok lol
thank you
Frankly, I can't follow the overall message in your nuanced & figurative words. Still, I always enjoy your talent for choosing fresh, original ways to state the everyday observations of life. Not getting the overall thread does not prevent a straightforward person like myself from enjoying the gracefulness of your word choices & the thought-provoking nature of your individual comments.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

thanks ...... many people find my work confusing
i only known one or two people who can see .. read more
Isfree will itself a matter of choice?
;-))
Nice poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nisreen

8 Years Ago

Interesting thought
thank you

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United Arab Emirates



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