Amen

To a beauty in all its form

through dark

The perfection of lacking perfection

lines tell a story

admiring a simple soul

in good

and bad

Absorbing all there is

Amen

to a creation 

Fallen ill

Mend me to be well

Reviews

[Hyacinth]

Beautifully writen, as always. Kepp it up!

[Nisreen]

Thank you H

[Hyacinth]

Don't mention it

[Einstein Noodle]

your closing couplet says it all ... i think this is a powerful take on humanity ... at the core of so many problems ..not just our imperfections but unable to see or admit them ... i think thats why i like those closing lines so much ..it is the beginning ... says i! :)
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[K.Butler]

This is really beautiful, smoothly flowing. The way it was written, and I think that it was purposely from the title, seems like a prayer.

Very well written!

[Nisreen]

Thank you .......

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This poem seems to illustrate to me the inability of its writer to determine perfections from imperfections, blinded somewhat, admiring beauty while in the dark.....

Given the allusions to illness here, i can sense the actual type of imperfections. Not that i will mention it here.
As always, a lovely write, tender and gentle in its flow of words and ideas.

I hope you are on the mend, Nisreen:)

[Nisreen]

I am very well ......... not blind loving it all
thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are strong. Each line added to question and leading to strong ending. To forgive and be mended. Place, we must find. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[dan]

Perfect, imperfect...such a fine line we must walk. Your write contains emotions that are tamped down to a whisper. Very nicely done, Nisreen. take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dear Dan

[barleygirl]

Your poem speaks to me this morning of acceptance. Since I've felt a few instances lately where my life choices were sorta looked down upon, your words are like healing balm. We all have our perfections & our imperfections. I love that phrase the most.

[Nisreen]

Thank you .......... i am humbled

[Richard Patrick]

beautiful. You have a way with words. They flow like waters from the heavens, may they be exquisitte as your choice of words. It was beauty, it speaks to thee of humanity.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard

[hcarson]

i'm loving the perffections of imperfections...truest words eveer relating to humans, we were never born to be perfect..it doesn't exist..only perfect FOR us. totally relate and hope youre keeping your chin up :)

[Nisreen]

I am
Thank you ............

[Circe]

It's not pleasant to be ill at all... such are our biological natures.. i like that your words embrace the good and bad and perfect imperfections! It's beautifully inclusive and celebrates humanity.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Circe