Wish

May my heart know more love than hate

Remember good will and forget harm

May these hands create

And never destroy

May the soul find fortune in little

And never want

May my body be happiness

Steering away from usage

May i be filled with light

Carrying not one moment in dark

Said a person of pure love for life

And wished the same for all

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

Such a wish is wonderful... maybe one day to be granted!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Terry

[fattycbreezy52]

Aha! This person deserves more than the worldly good. This makes a nice prayer. Thank you for some motivation:)

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and hopeful words. I like the hope and want of the words. Thank you Nisreen for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

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Another sweet, philosophical poem, Nisreen.

A poem of longing for the correct attitude to life. Comparing what one wishes to feel against what one never wants to feel.
Simplicity is all we really need. The rest is just not good for the soul.

Wise words from a very thoughtful poet.

[Nisreen]

Thank you .........................

[Annie Nicole]

I think we all wish we could be more satisfied with the little things that are free and right in front of us, and some of us do, but many are always looking for more , but if we were to just take the time to see what is truly important than maybe your poem will come to life. I really liked it!

[Nisreen]

thanks Annie

[Phillip Francis]

This is very sweet. Thank you for sharing.

[Nisreen]

Merci Phillip
i am a fan of your writing

[R Smith]

a prayer for all mankind, well said Nisreen :)

[Nisreen]

Thanks ................ :)

[dan]

Nisreen, A beautiful and heartwarming piece of work. I could read writes like this all day and not get tired. So beautiful! take care...dan

[Nisreen]

thanks ....................

[Spencer Barker]

Beautiful writing, RiverSided! Excellent work.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Spencer

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Poetically medicinal, Nis! Amen :)

[Nisreen]

Amen thank you lynn