Priority - inspired by my dear friend "Jacob"

The keys went on top

of my piece of cheese

The shoes that were meant on my feet

somehow were under my head

I walked out in my PJs

To attend a meeting

The cab i aimed for 

Stopped for a train

Money i set for rent

Ended up paying for a ring

My words went for a fight

Instead of bringing peace

Hands made to love

Slapped an innocent man

Legs running for the bus

Tripped the old lady passing by

Beauty in every leaf

Ended up in a piece of paper

Humor to lighten life

Was made to mock

A heart meant to carry

Dumped half the city

Reviews

[hcarson]

I like this i enjoyed and could relate to fqr too many of the comparisons haha, well done

[Nisreen]

Thank you .................

[KWP]

just go back to bed and start the day over .... :D

I like your contrasts here ... I like the pace ... and your words made me smile cos we have all had days like these X

[Nisreen]

Thanks KWP ....

[KWP]

welcome You X

[Lyn Anderson]

life can be chaotic, maddening, frustrating, and challenging, and sometimes we do things we think we aren't capable of.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Lyn Anderson]

you are very welcome.

[Richard Patrick]

beautiful piece. The poem speaks of the delimia of the person that he as experienced. The piece has to have a great of bad news, there has to be some good news.

[Nisreen]

i guess .... thank you

[Emily]

Nice poem!
Keep on writing!!

[Nisreen]

Thanks Emily

[matpat]

Very interesting poem, I liked it, it made you think, good work.

[Nisreen]

thanks ..................