Hold you

For the first time

I wish i could run

Into you

Reviews

[wordman]

forever in love,short and to the point !

[Nisreen]

thank yoou ...................

[freaksheet]

Only 11 words and it's still pretty awesome!

[Nisreen]

Thank you ..................

[freaksheet]

you're welcome .....................

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

That beautiful desire to collide into someone, to dive in and immerse yourself into that sacred soul that whispers back in return ... this is the beauty that breathes in your words. Lovely!

[Nisreen]

Thank you
linda

[Lyn Anderson]

it's interesting how a few well placed words can say more than they would appear to.

[Nisreen]

True .............. thank you

[Sami Khalil]

Short but says a lot in few words. Summation and infatuation...:)......................

[Nisreen]

Thank you ....................

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[KnightOfAnarchy]

Oh wow, I was expecting this to be longer but this one of those
Short but sweet pieces. Just a few lines can hold so many emotions.

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[Terrence Chang]

Ahh the feeling of falling in love. Short but still gave a punch to the write. Loved it.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome River

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

I realized that you have a knack for short but sweet pieces that are soooooooo deep in their shortness.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ...................................

[Woody]

I like the use of "run into" rather than "meet". I would never have thought of it. but then that gives a new meaning to the poem. concise and beautiful.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Woody

[Ruth]

Fantastic...concise and packs a punch of self explanation, awesome :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you dear