Vocals

Sitting through a white place

Listening to blues 

Chapman sang in the background

In my theater

Talking to my doctor

Clearly he knows of me

Every inch of my soul

To my eyes

We sang as he put together instruments

As peaceful for me

A calm has divided our space

Through an oxygen rod 

We spoke of painless procedures

Wheels dancing on clean floors

Calling me too young

To be under his magical fingers

Injecting the gas of life

To glide away the timeless hit

Taking pictures of every side

And making a video 

I sat in prayer while he went on

To the end of a perfect Thursday

He took off his hat

Wished me well

We said our goodbyes 

Author's Note

I want to thank a beautiful man
That is my surgeon who took me in a split of a second
He is brave and kind
And he will remain in my memory the most loved for his care

Thank you MK .... you put me through a world of pain only to get better as fast as possible ..... God bless you

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- wow... -- surgeons perform miracles... but you write miraculously beautiful poetry about the experience... -- heal soon, dear friend... and if you have already, then well done... :)

[Nisreen]

thank you ................

[. serah .]

-- you're very welcome... :)

[terry smith]

this is the first time i have read about a dr. visit and it sounded beautiful......I think you could write about gum and it would sound beautiful :)

[Nisreen]

lol
this was an operation
i really did sing while i was in there
thank u terry

[terry smith]

well I hope you are on the mend and have a swift and full recovery

[Nisreen]

i am ok .... cant complain .... i dont make gum sound beautiful
u just favor my words because we are friends
thank u

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i could feel the healing in this, and the gratitude...we have to get through much pain, often, in order to find that healing.

nicely expressed...i hope he sees this.

j.

[Nisreen]

thank you j