Lake Princess

A body of water turned to ice

Clouds of white descended to earth

On a dream crescendo

She appeared

Looking around to see all white

The heart has trembled

Being in love with space

Burdens of the body float free

Closing the lids of turmoil

The sun has set a path

A heaven to be

Taking simple steps to a toe

River smoked a halo

Surrounded by feathers of leaf

She twirled to a turn

Landing in a praise of words

The fish stood out of current

She handled the pivot 

Swaying on her back to fly

Away to her home

A whisper of warmth

Kept her in confessions

With one above 

If i die 

A line split in two

Set me free here

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Very mystical, enchanting. Who is she I wonder! A poem rich in softness and mystery!:):)

[Nisreen]

Thank you Andrew lol

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome O Enchanted One!

[Nisreen]

How is the weather there on your end of the world ???

[andrew mitchell]

a lovely sunny 26 today

[Nisreen]

We just rose above 0 degrees Celsius today
and we will pay for it next week .... snow storms coming lol
i need to buy a toque

[andrew mitchell]

Wow you need a second home in the world! better hurry, get your work published, get on Tv, do interviews, magazine covers then being famous just flick through the real estate papers and pick one! no more cold! No snow except on holidays and sip on a tropical cocktail! Its just too easy!

[Nisreen]

actually my home country is super hot
but Canada was a visit that has really over extended ..... but in a good way always

[andrew mitchell]

i know your history nisreena lol

[Nisreen]

Have a great day Andrew

[ms. barrie]

very beautiful, fragile poem that captures mystical poignancy...
written with eloquence.

Thank you for sharing (:

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[Ruth]

There is a soft beauty to this...a gentleness that understands and carries a tone, beautiful...

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much for your kindness

[JayceeC]

Gret mythical tone to this piece. It's soft and alluring. My favorite line is;
A whisper of warmth
Kept her in confessions

I see the lake with its cool morning mist hanging thick like its been placed by a magic hand.

[Nisreen]

So insightful
Thank you J

[Terry O'Leary]

Nice flow and imagery... I like it!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Terry

[Spencer Barker]

Very nice! I found this be have a note of spirituality and a symphony of a goddess. The imagery is also excellent. Awesome writing!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Spencer