Lake Princess

A body of water turned to ice

Clouds of white descended to earth

On a dream crescendo

She appeared

Looking around to see all white

The heart has trembled

Being in love with space

Burdens of the body float free

Closing the lids of turmoil

The sun has set a path

A heaven to be

Taking simple steps to a toe

River smoked a halo

Surrounded by feathers of leaf

She twirled to a turn

Landing in a praise of words

The fish stood out of current

She handled the pivot 

Swaying on her back to fly

Away to her home

A whisper of warmth

Kept her in confessions

With one above 

If i die 

A line split in two

Set me free here

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice places you took me and good visions create by your words.
"She twirled to a turn
Landing in a praise of words"
I liked the language used and the story told in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[A.marie.speaks]

Beautiful imagery. Reminded me of a mermaid. Great work.

[Nisreen]

Thank you ...........

[Perkele.7885]

It sounds as if the ice is melting and the fish are about to spawn, all part of nature's ritual and in time with the watch of the creator!

[Nisreen]

In time for spring all things new now .... even parts of one's body has been reborn

[Annie Nicole]

This has a very light and warm touch to it, and it is very enjoyable to read! : )

[Nisreen]

Thank you Annie

[Silke Fisher]

I marvel at this bit: River smoked a halo
Surrounded by feathers of leaf

That's just stunning!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Silke

[Troy Henson]

A beautiful and warm feel throughout this piece. Lovely subtle tones and great flow.

Very nice

[Nisreen]

Thank you Troy

[dan]

Your word play is tremendous. I don't know how you can take words to form a sentence, then arrange them in an unorthodox way that is so appealing. And the ending? "set me free here?" Such a simple sentence but it resonates like waves crashing ashore. Your writing is VERY accomplished and stylized.
Great write, Nisreen! take care...dan

[Nisreen]

Thank you Dan

[R Smith]

a beautiful princess who swoops and dives for food I think, told with such effortless grace my friend :)

[Nisreen]

Thank you Richard

[terry smith]

a beautiful winter ballet.....

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

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This reminds me of my days studying Greek Mythology and the Gods.

A Goddess born on wings, lands on Earth and admires its beauty. And is in awe of it.

She sounds so beautiful, whoever She is.

Just lovely writing.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much