Balanced Ballet

Silent ruffles on sun dew

Shutting an envelope

Gentle change comes through

Reading a new

A guiding moon

Turned into a frame

Shine to be allowed

Staring down on me

A ribbon filled sky

Sweet bits cover

Focusing on none of the dance

Lucky chances always meant

No place to lose

Divine strength pulling out any cry

Waltz sway into a pond

Ships swift to another bay

Tongue tied by frozen leaves

Cups of dreams fill this stream

Glistening ripples

Star filled in human kind

Touching the soul

Smiling on transparent grounds 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description. You create vision and dance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[KLH]

Very nice, I really enjoy the imagery in this poem

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[θεά]

This has this ethereal, moondance kind of quality it. I wish you could have done a little more with the part about dancing, it would have brought out the justness of the title more strongly. But then, you've opened up more possibilities to the poem instead of making it reassert its title. Liked it reading it.

Thanks for sharing,

Best,
M.

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[WittyWonka]

I like your writing. It is intricate and intelligent.

[Nisreen]

Thanks :)

[WittyWonka]

You're welcome!

[A hare off]

I like how you have woven the beauty of nature through this wonderful piece. A poetic tapestry.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review