Loving you

Like an ocean of open books

The rain of stars fell onto the window

Loving you felt so right

Burning a natural shade of paradise

Something real remained in the background

Rising above the concept of torment

Lights ran a crystal course 

We never needed to say much

Like drops of heaven 

Somehow i found a home in your eyes

We created a new age of style

Tranquil in flow to just be

You took me out on dates 

Across the world complimenting my smile 

In a way i became yours

And you were always mine

Without agreement

Living through all disagreements

Loving you was always natural

Forgiving in all

Simply letting go

In peace 

Loving you was just us

Untold 

To make a union

Unquestioned

Yet clearly seen 

in your stroke 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, kind and true words written.
"Loving you was always natural
Forgiving in all"
I liked the the above lines. Life and love is give and take. To forgive and to be forgiven. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Wow. Elegant and tender, releasing the flow of reverberating passion. "Loving you was just us -
Untold" really stuck with me. Nice job.

[Nisreen]

Thank you 😊 👍

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Romantic with wonderful wording,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Nisreen]

Thank you James

[Annie Nicole]

Dear serendipity,
This poem is a beautiful illusion of what it is like to be 'in love' with someone/something. The happiness that is created through that love is described so elegantly through your poem. I truly admire this wonderful work of yours and I look forward to more. :)

Thank you,
Annie

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Annie

[Annie Nicole]

Of course, I really did enjoy reading this one!

[Emily]

'Yet clearly seen
in your stroke"

Love that!
Keep on writing!!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really touching piece.
Well done.

[Nisreen]

Thank You Dreamer

[Einstein Noodle]

"You took me out on dates
Across the world complimenting my smile"

really like those lines ..reflects the simplicity you use for a very complex human condition ..being in love :))) last line surprised me a little after such a gentle read ..(but i'm probably just a dirty ol' man:)
loved reading ..read it thrice ..nice work!
E.

[Nisreen]

I didnt mean It like That at all

Lol

Thanks E

[Einstein Noodle]

i didn't think you did ... ;} read your poem again ..such a gentle flowing "in love" ... just beautiful!

[Akshita]

A simple and pretty romantic poem!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your kind review

[andrew mitchell]

a lovely poem, had a natural calmness about it radiating. a nice love to have when it just seems like its just you two and the world.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Andrew

[GalaxyGhost]

This is a rather sweet poem and if I had to state my own opinion (and I mean this respectfully) is that I would capitalize all the "I"s in a reference to oneself, but I believe this was for a style of poetry and I understand that. Other than that, I just really enjoyed this poem of yours and it is a peaceful tone of it and just a sort of innocent love that I noticed! Great job!

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much for your review