A train

As i heard it run

My eyes witnessed

Change

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your short lines brought back images to me, of railway routes closed down in the 1960's under the dreaded Dr Beeching (politician back then in UK). Some of them are finding new life. A positive in my opinion. That's were you took me Precious. Happy New Year.

Chris

[Nisreen]

Thank you Christine happy new year

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"A Train"
Precious Seconds,
This passage is a stream of thought which shows how one thing or experience shows the movement of life phase to another. I know the clickity clack of the train tracks is a fun image of movement. fun peice!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Nisreen]

Thank you Kathy.

[terry smith]

you never know what the winds will bring

[Nisreen]

True. Thanks Terry

[Relic]

The only thing that comes to mind when reading this is native Americans seeing the first train cut a path through their lands.

I'm curious as to what you were thinking about when you wrote it?

[Nisreen]

A life changing event. Thank you for your review