PWEETY LASS

Do you know the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

Every time she passes by,

Everyone stares and goes O my!

 

Don’t you know the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

She draws with her light pen so well

From where she learnt no one can tell

 

Have you seen the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

Such pretty straight legs she’s got

At times me thinks she’s but a god

 

Haven’t you seen the pweety lass?

With the shining black rimmed glass.

All around her is light so bright

Glowing from her whitened teeth

 

Lemme tell you ‘bout the pweety lass

With the shining black rimmed glass

Some men say she’s full of s_ _t

But I say she’ll soon be a big hit

 

So if you see the pweety lass

With the shining black rimmed glass

From me please give a warm wet kiss

And tell her how much her verve I miss

Author's Note

just playing around, but ended up liking what i wrote. hope you enjoy reading this.

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

Haven’t you seen the pweety lass?
With the shining black rimmed glass. that sounds cool. but it stopped rhyming on 3 of the paragraphs....but other than that i liked it.

[Scandalous]

Very nicely written, slightly confusing, and the rhyme scheme is off, but that's what makes it such an interesting piece!

~ Scandalous