To the shores of Tripoli

A Ten/40 challenge for Veterans Day.

Rain dissolves blackened snow

 

Protesters forever chide

 

But strangers do not know

 

Though pundits take a side

 

Friend have some patience

 

Drum roll an eerie measure

 

Tears march in cadence

 

Permanent separation a treasure

 

Newspaper deadline and

 

Montezuma doesn’t rhyme

Reviews

This is wonderful, I like this. I loved the last line the best. Nicely written.

[Helen Crutchett]

Wonderful submission for Tovli's Ten. Thanks for joining in Quince!

Helena

[Tovli]

excellent flow. enjoyed! tovli

[Sean M. Addams]

wow... really impressive!!!!!