Blind Future

A ten word challenge

The cold air blows from the north

Playground swings float with ghosts

Dancing brown leaves march forth

Gardens become lifeless hosts

 

Echoing truths told by mothers

Dislodging the luster of liberty

Solace sought in faces of others

Dampend cheeks of misery

 

My broken heart summons veracity

An adopted dream digs for worth

Thick autumn rain magnifies clearly

A lesson on change from the earth

To Intuition I trust and am now listening

Under another door I see light glistening

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Inspired by kids I see going off to college

Reviews

[Tovli]

very nice--i liked the way it flowed. tovli