Ding dong

A six word story

Mommy, two sad soldiers are here.

 

Author's Note

For any who don't know, when a soldier is killed two soldiers usually bring the news of the death personally.

Reviews

[tonymad11392]

wow, this really proves that sparse language can convey a very deep and meaningful message, great job at presenting a situation in very few words

[deadlife]

really a touching story. you've painted colours with these six wods, a brilliant piece.
a fave indeed.
bless you.

take care dear.
~rupam

[Lauren Marie]

Nicely done. I liked this story. It tells so much in such small and few words. Congrats in the contest!
~Lauren