Oh, my sweet love, you have nothing to prove To these adoring eyes you are perfection Still seeing myself in you, how I so linger between the lines Still beating within your chest, expelled with every breath Taking my words to change them Taking my hopes to twist them For another... For what will I say when it hurts? Knowing the heartache, the anger, the strain I have caused Decorated in your pretty endearments snapping like a whip And in the shadows where I fall before you
How can you not know of how I ache to take you into my arms? Can you not feel me as I feel you? Not even time has dared to come between us What hope does distance have when faced with our hearts? As even now, I hold you against this chest Even now, I run to you, withstand beside you For us... Can close my eyes to get lost in your hair Twine our two hands against a steady cadence Smile so warmly cheek to cheek as I hum of our soul-song If only to remind that I may seem far, but am ever near
Should you know of how I love you Would you break the rules to be at my side? Would you weep in sheer relief as I would? Leap into these arms which can recall every second without you Kiss of these trembling lips which have waited... Waited so long for you Would you take my yearning heart into your delicate hands? For yourself... Would you honor your truths? Our truths? Because we both know that we will always find the other there Amongst the many curves, the dusty stepping stones Where our two paths collide, coincide, and not one of least resistance
Charming and beguiling... the outpourings of a longing soul... I was struck by the snapping of the whip, the twine of hands against a steady cadence, by the dusty stepping stones that lead to honored truths. The words flow with intensity and feeling, so we never doubt your beautiful intentions... Reading you is like being caressed in a warm shower by soft fragrance that probes and finds the places of pleasure...I find your writing simply delicious...
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
"That probes and finds the places of pleasure..." Your reviews... So humbled am I.:) Thank you, dear.. read more"That probes and finds the places of pleasure..." Your reviews... So humbled am I.:) Thank you, dear Jibs. How I look forward to many more.
The is an inspiring poem with power and passion. Never alone I feel is saying my thoughts are forever with you and on you. I like these words, How can you not know how I ache foe you? Great poem.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so very much, Howard.:) Am delighted you found this inspiring and completely embraced the .. read moreThank you so very much, Howard.:) Am delighted you found this inspiring and completely embraced the message. Cannot wait to return the kindness upon your own page! Looking forward to it!
Charming and beguiling... the outpourings of a longing soul... I was struck by the snapping of the whip, the twine of hands against a steady cadence, by the dusty stepping stones that lead to honored truths. The words flow with intensity and feeling, so we never doubt your beautiful intentions... Reading you is like being caressed in a warm shower by soft fragrance that probes and finds the places of pleasure...I find your writing simply delicious...
Posted 8 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
"That probes and finds the places of pleasure..." Your reviews... So humbled am I.:) Thank you, dear.. read more"That probes and finds the places of pleasure..." Your reviews... So humbled am I.:) Thank you, dear Jibs. How I look forward to many more.
I'm rolling in my future grave. But not in a bad way. Lordy Lordy! Sweetness and then some I see. It really is a precise poke in my side, these words, not directed to me directly, but never-the-less devilishly dead on target . Br a v o !
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Ahaha.:) Glad it could leave an impression. Thank you bunches, sugar!
Am an authentic lover of all genres. There is no form of expression that I do not adore as I recognize and appreciate all forms of art. Returning to this site, as a fellow word enthusiast, I intend to.. more..