HERE HER EYES ARE ALL THE COLORS OF THE SEA. WHERE GLIMMERING MERMAIDS SWIM AMID THE CONSUMING DEPTHS, AND EVERY TELLING EMOTION SINGS A SIREN'S SONG. HOW SHE CAPTIVATES, INSPIRES AND IMPRISONS A WAYWARD SPIRIT. BINDS ME BETWEEN HEARTBEATS. THE DARK TO THE OTHER'S LIGHT. THE BLACK TO THE OTHER'S WHITE. AS NAMELESS AS THE DAY BEFORE SHE WAS CONCEIVED.
~
I SHOULD NOT LOVE YOU YOU WHO SELDOM GIVES YET AM I NOT THE ADORING FOOL WHO YEARNS TO AWAKEN WHAT REMAINS OF YOUR SOUL
~ IF COMPASSION BE A BURDEN THAN I EMBRACE THE WEIGHT OF THE WORLD
~
CLOSE YOUR EYES AS WE KISS YOU'LL TASTE DREAMS ON MY LIPS
~
AND IF SHE SHOULD BE TAKEN FIRST IN OUR NEXT LIFE MAY I FIND HER QUICKLY FOR IF WE CANNOT SHARE IMMORTALITY MAY WE ALWAYS FEEL THAT TENDER NUDGE
~
IS IT ASKING TOO MUCH TO DESIRE YOU EVERY SECOND TO DRINK OF YOU EVERY MINUTE TO DEVOUR YOU EVERY HOUR OR SHALL WE SIMPLY FORGET OF TIME RELEASE THE WHEEL HAVE PASSIONS STEER OH, HOW I ACHE TO DROWN IN YOU
~
THE DAYS ARE SPENT IN SILENT WAITING WAITING FOR THAT CHIME FOR MY HEART TO STUMBLE AT THE SIGHT OF YOUR NAME YET ALL HOPEFUL HOPING IS GIVEN IN VAIN AND MY NIGHTS... MY NIGHTS ARE FORFIETED TO YOUR TIMELESS TOUCH TO DREAMS OF YOUR SWEET, INTOXICATING KISSES TO THE HEAT OF YOUR BREATH UPON CRAVING SKIN TO THE LOVE I SEE IN ENDLESSLY BLUE EYES ONLY TO FIND YOU HAVE GONE WITH THE SUNRISE AND I LIE ON TEAR SOAKED PILLOWS CURLING AROUND THE FRAGMENTS OF A TAXED SOUL WONDERING IF I WILL EVER HAVE THE STRENGTH TO QUIT YOU
~
I WOULD VERY MUCH LOVE TO BE IN YOUR ARMS TONIGHT TUCKED TIGHT AGAINST YOUR WARMTH WHERE I CAN WATCH A SMILE DANCE IN YOUR EYES SEE BEAUTIFUL YOU SPLAYED ACROSS SHEETS TUNNEL FINGERTIPS THROUGH SOFT HAIR AND SIGH THAT SLOW MELTING SIGH THAT WHISPERS OF A THOUSAND WISHES FOR ALL THE LITTLE THINGS
~
GIVE ME YOUR BODY I'LL SEE IT PLEASED AND I'LL DO SO ON BUCKLED KNEES
~
IF YOU CAN NOT, WILL NOT LOVE ME IN RETURN THAN TELL ME SO I CAN KEEP SEARCHING FOR THE ONE WHO WILL FOR THE ONE WHO CRIES FOR PASSIONATE EMBRACES AND PRAYS FOR LOYAL LOVING WINGS
LOVE IS MY LANGUAGE I GROW TIRED OF SPEAKING IN WISHFUL WHISPERS WHEN MY GREATEST DESIRE IS TO SING MY LOVE FROM ROOFTOPS AND SWOON TO THE BEAT OF TWO JOINED HEARTS
~
I TALK WITH COMPLETE STRANGERS MORE THAN I TALK WITH MY LOVER HOW WHACK IS THAT?
~
LIKE THE PHEONIX SHE IGNITES A WILDFIRE SIMMERS BEYOND FLESH AND BONE LEAVES ME GASPING, TREMBLING BEGGING FOR MORE ANOTHER DRIP OF THAT HONEYED NECTAR TASTING OF PARADISE UPON A SILVER TONGUE
~
I LOVE YOU AS I ADORE ALL THE STARS IN THE NIGHT SKY EACH THAT I WOULD PLUCK FROM THE HEAVENS TO CRAFT A BOUNDLESS TWINKLE IN YOUR EYES SO IF YOU SHOULD EVER DOUBT THE EXTENTS OF MY AFFECTION YOU HAVE ONLY TO GAZE UPON YOUR OWN REFLECTION
~
I LONG TO FEEL THE WARMTH OF TWO ARMS LIPS THAT KISS OF ACHING SKIN DELICATE PINK CLOUDS THAT TASTE OF US BREATHE ME DEEP INTO YOUR CHEST SHARE WITH ME COLORFUL FALL DAYS THE SOUND OF OUR LAUGHTER AS WE GIVE CHASE THEN LAY ME DOWN UPON A BED OF LEAVES AS IF THERE IS NOTHING MORE PRECIOUS AND TELL ME THAT I'M YOURS
This is heartwarming!!! Lot of wisdom and passion of love flows throughout the write... It was very thought provoking with the imageries you brought with your words... The construction of the poem along with its magnificent use of words all helped the poem to find its true feet... You wrote it with so much sincererity... A lovely thoughtful write...
Sincerely
Dhiman
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Dhiman. I feel a blush is in order... Ahaha.:) Such a lovely review this is. And .. read moreThank you so much, Dhiman. I feel a blush is in order... Ahaha.:) Such a lovely review this is. And I will return it in kind.
These are inspiring candies, verbal delights that come from the heart and caress the reader's very being, arousing and stroking with expert touch... words that Romeo and Juliet might have penned.... Each piece has its own relish and it seems clumsy to pick out special gems... but I was struck by the weight of the world, by beautiful you splayed across sheets, by buckled knees, by paradise upon a silvered tongue, by delicate pink clouds that taste of us... You write with passion and sensual awareness, with the heart of a true romantic.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Had this review came from anyone else, I may not have had the same reaction... But since I have read.. read moreHad this review came from anyone else, I may not have had the same reaction... But since I have read some of your work, Jibey, I cannot help but blush like a school girl.:) Thank you... Even your review is as lovely, as stimulating as your poetry.
The capitals are probably appropriate.
Although they did catch me by surprise.
Maybe that's what I needed today.
WHat caught me more by surprise, however,
is how well this darn piece was written!
I've no real words for or against it as it just
stands there like a golden edifice in the desert.
Romance doesn't seem so dis-heartening now....
Kongrats ! ! !
Encore!
$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Ahaha.:) I think you and I are going to be buddies, 1infiniteJustice. These are pieces posted on an .. read moreAhaha.:) I think you and I are going to be buddies, 1infiniteJustice. These are pieces posted on an old Instagram account, were written in capital as to make it easier for the readers to be able to see against detailed photographs. Simply saved this way and transferred as such. Thank you so much for your review, sweetheart.:) It left me with warm feelings.
You is certainly welcome! You have yourself doled out healing artifacts to me and others. I hope it .. read moreYou is certainly welcome! You have yourself doled out healing artifacts to me and others. I hope it continues ad infinitum. The world is in need of minds WITH hearts. Warm and bubbly is what we need! Warm and bubbly...warm and bubbl...oh yea im Dalton btw. I don't mind sharing my name publicly here. I have noticed others prefer secrecy. Though, is any of it really secret? Again..warm n bubbly warm n bubbly.."I say that because lately that has not been my modus operandi :(
Whip me if you must!
But do give me a voice in edgewise.
I'm treading what was given to me darling, it is not a simple thing yknow? Forgiv-ith ! But do not forget-ith! Write on!
8 Years Ago
Ahaha.:) You're something else, sweetness. And in a good way to say the least. It is a true pleasure.. read moreAhaha.:) You're something else, sweetness. And in a good way to say the least. It is a true pleasure to meet you Dalton. All warm and bubbly.:) I am Kylie. And you write on, write on as well!
Thought-full, sensitive... and emotionally presented. Heat with caring and intent. Left a "smile" behind.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Chris. So glad that this collection could bring a smile.:) Your review had left a smile a.. read moreThank you, Chris. So glad that this collection could bring a smile.:) Your review had left a smile as well.
HERE HER EYES ARE ALL THE COLORS OF THE SEA.
WHERE GLIMMERING MERMAIDS SWIM AMID THE CONSUMING DEPTHS,
AND EVERY TELLING EMOTION SINGS A SIREN'S SONG.
HOW SHE CAPTIVATES, INSPIRES AND IMPRISONS A WAYWARD SPIRIT.
BINDS ME BETWEEN HEARTBEATS.
THE DARK TO THE OTHER'S LIGHT.
THE BLACK TO THE OTHER'S WHITE.
AS NAMELESS AS THE DAY BEFORE SHE WAS CONCEIVED.
~
I SHOULD NOT LOVE YOU
YOU WHO SELDOM GIVES
YET AM I NOT THE ADORING FOOL
WHO YEARNS TO AWAKEN
WHAT REMAINS OF YOUR SOUL
~
IF COMPASSION BE A BURDEN
THAN I EMBRACE THE WEIGHT OF THE WORLD
~
CLOSE YOUR EYES AS WE KISS
YOU'LL TASTE DREAMS ON MY LIPS
~
AND IF SHE SHOULD BE TAKEN FIRST
IN OUR NEXT LIFE MAY I FIND HER QUICKLY
FOR IF WE CANNOT SHARE IMMORTALITY
MAY WE ALWAYS FEEL THAT TENDER NUDGE
~
IS IT ASKING TOO MUCH
TO DESIRE YOU EVERY SECOND
TO DRINK OF YOU EVERY MINUTE
TO DEVOUR YOU EVERY HOUR
OR SHALL WE SIMPLY FORGET OF TIME
RELEASE THE WHEEL
HAVE PASSIONS STEER
OH, HOW I ACHE TO DROWN IN YOU
~
THE DAYS ARE SPENT IN SILENT WAITING
WAITING FOR THAT CHIME
FOR MY HEART TO STUMBLE AT THE SIGHT OF YOUR NAME
YET ALL HOPEFUL HOPING IS GIVEN IN VAIN
AND MY NIGHTS...
MY NIGHTS ARE FORFIETED TO YOUR TIMELESS TOUCH
TO DREAMS OF YOUR SWEET, INTOXICATING KISSES
TO THE HEAT OF YOUR BREATH UPON CRAVING SKIN
TO THE LOVE I SEE IN ENDLESSLY BLUE EYES
ONLY TO FIND YOU HAVE GONE WITH THE SUNRISE
AND I LIE ON TEAR SOAKED PILLOWS
CURLING AROUND THE FRAGMENTS OF A TAXED SOUL
WONDERING IF I WILL EVER HAVE THE STRENGTH
TO QUIT YOU
~
I WOULD VERY MUCH LOVE
TO BE IN YOUR ARMS TONIGHT
TUCKED TIGHT AGAINST YOUR WARMTH
WHERE I CAN WATCH A SMILE DANCE IN YOUR EYES
SEE BEAUTIFUL YOU SPLAYED ACROSS SHEETS
TUNNEL FINGERTIPS THROUGH SOFT HAIR
AND SIGH THAT SLOW MELTING SIGH
THAT WHISPERS OF A THOUSAND WISHES
FOR ALL THE LITTLE THINGS
~
GIVE ME YOUR BODY
I'LL SEE IT PLEASED
AND I'LL DO SO
ON BUCKLED KNEES
~
IF YOU CAN NOT, WILL NOT LOVE ME IN RETURN
THAN TELL ME SO I CAN KEEP SEARCHING FOR THE ONE WHO WILL
FOR THE ONE WHO CRIES FOR PASSIONATE EMBRACES
AND PRAYS FOR LOYAL LOVING WINGS
LOVE IS MY LANGUAGE
I GROW TIRED OF SPEAKING IN WISHFUL WHISPERS
WHEN MY GREATEST DESIRE IS TO SING MY LOVE FROM ROOFTOPS
AND SWOON TO THE BEAT OF TWO JOINED HEARTS
~
I TALK WITH COMPLETE STRANGERS
MORE THAN I TALK WITH MY LOVER
HOW WHACK IS THAT?
~
LIKE THE PHEONIX SHE IGNITES A WILDFIRE
SIMMERS BEYOND FLESH AND BONE
LEAVES ME GASPING, TREMBLING
BEGGING FOR MORE
ANOTHER DRIP OF THAT HONEYED NECTAR
TASTING OF PARADISE UPON A SILVER TONGUE
~
I LOVE YOU
AS I ADORE ALL THE STARS IN THE NIGHT SKY
EACH THAT I WOULD PLUCK FROM THE HEAVENS
TO CRAFT A BOUNDLESS TWINKLE IN YOUR EYES
SO IF YOU SHOULD EVER DOUBT THE EXTENTS OF MY AFFECTION
YOU HAVE ONLY TO GAZE UPON YOUR OWN REFLECTION
~
I LONG TO FEEL THE WARMTH OF TWO ARMS
LIPS THAT KISS OF ACHING SKIN
DELICATE PINK CLOUDS THAT TASTE OF US
BREATHE ME DEEP INTO YOUR CHEST
SHARE WITH ME COLORFUL FALL DAYS
THE SOUND OF OUR LAUGHTER AS WE GIVE CHASE
THEN LAY ME DOWN UPON A BED OF LEAVES
AS IF THERE IS NOTHING MORE PRECIOUS
AND TELL ME THAT I'M YOURS
At all touch my heart , bound me think deep feelings
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Wow, sam.:) Can I do like a collective 'thank you' for all your reviews? Aha... Would that suffice f.. read moreWow, sam.:) Can I do like a collective 'thank you' for all your reviews? Aha... Would that suffice for your wonderful and kind words? Thank you, sweetheart.:) For taking the time that you had taken and for enjoying each piece as they are. And thank you for the smile.
I LOVE YOU
AS I ADORE ALL THE STARS IN THE NIGHT SKY
EACH THAT I WOULD PLUCK FROM THE HEAVENS
TO CRAFT A BOUNDLESS TWINKLE IN YOUR EYES
SO IF YOU SHOULD EVER DOUBT THE EXTENTS OF MY AFFECTION
YOU HAVE ONLY TO GAZE UPON YOUR OWN REFLECTION
HERE HER EYES ARE ALL THE COLORS OF THE SEA.
WHERE GLIMMERING MERMAIDS SWIM AMID THE CONSUMING DEPTHS,
AND EVERY TELLING EMOTION SINGS A SIREN'S SONG.
HOW SHE CAPTIVATES, INSPIRES AND IMPRISONS A WAYWARD SPIRIT.
BINDS ME BETWEEN HEARTBEATS.
THE DARK TO THE OTHER'S LIGHT.
THE BLACK TO THE OTHER'S WHITE.
AS NAMELESS AS THE DAY BEFORE SHE WAS CONCEIVED.
I WOULD VERY MUCH LOVE
TO BE IN YOUR ARMS TONIGHT
TUCKED TIGHT AGAINST YOUR WARMTH
WHERE I CAN WATCH A SMILE DANCE IN YOUR EYES
SEE BEAUTIFUL YOU SPLAYED ACROSS SHEETS
TUNNEL FINGERTIPS THROUGH SOFT HAIR
AND SIGH THAT SLOW MELTING SIGH
THAT WHISPERS OF A THOUSAND WISHES
FOR ALL THE LITTLE THINGS
~
GIVE ME YOUR BODY
I'LL SEE IT PLEASED
AND I'LL DO SO
ON BUCKLED KNEES
I LONG TO FEEL THE WARMTH OF TWO ARMS
LIPS THAT KISS OF ACHING SKIN
DELICATE PINK CLOUDS THAT TASTE OF US
BREATHE ME DEEP INTO YOUR CHEST
SHARE WITH ME COLORFUL FALL DAYS
THE SOUND OF OUR LAUGHTER AS WE GIVE CHASE
THEN LAY ME DOWN UPON A BED OF LEAVES
AS IF THERE IS NOTHING MORE PRECIOUS
AND TELL ME THAT I'M YOURS
so sweet words used, you can see such type feelings in my poem. I like
Profound. Mesmerizing. Enchanting. Reading it was like being wrapped in silk sheets that were almost too intimate and yet sensually addictive enough to make you stay. Exquisitely crafted and Beautiful Read.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much, CoffeeHunter. I tend to get a little...umm...intimate in some of my writings.:).. read moreThank you very much, CoffeeHunter. I tend to get a little...umm...intimate in some of my writings.:) But am elated you had enjoyed yourself nonetheless.
This is heartwarming!!! Lot of wisdom and passion of love flows throughout the write... It was very thought provoking with the imageries you brought with your words... The construction of the poem along with its magnificent use of words all helped the poem to find its true feet... You wrote it with so much sincererity... A lovely thoughtful write...
Sincerely
Dhiman
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Dhiman. I feel a blush is in order... Ahaha.:) Such a lovely review this is. And .. read moreThank you so much, Dhiman. I feel a blush is in order... Ahaha.:) Such a lovely review this is. And I will return it in kind.
Am an authentic lover of all genres. There is no form of expression that I do not adore as I recognize and appreciate all forms of art. Returning to this site, as a fellow word enthusiast, I intend to.. more..