A Teenagers Journey

I open my eyes every morning,
Trying to figure out,
Why my head keeps on soring.
I no longer see the person I knew.
My identity lost in waves blue.

I feel stranded in this world of nothing.
Taking blows to become something.
This search was unnecessary.
What will become of this many very.

I walk on the road to nowhere,
In this world of nothing.
Maybe someone will come all long,
To end all of these short comings.

I want to run away but,
I have no where to run to.
My escape routs have been burned,
In this world of blue.

Why can’t I see what everyone else can?
My brain now twisted and bent.
I have all the time in the world
To just vent.

I sit on the curb,
I just might drown,
In the silence all around.

My tears sting,
Slowly dripping down my face.
I need someone who has my back.
But this is not the case.

I wish I owned a time machine,
I apologize,
You must believe,
I never wanted it to end like this.
I made made choices that are amiss.

The walls are breathing down my neck.
I need some help,
to forget.
Medicine to heal regret.
My guardian angel from above.
Why have to failed me?
I need to reset,
my life.

How do I fix,
all of the unhappiness?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Junger]

Amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Echo]

This is a great piece. In some spots a tad confusing but still amazing :D
I love the tone it sets.
~Echo

[Shy Girl]

Teenagers aren't the only ones who feel those emotions at all. We all have a time or two, because, nothing is perfect. I loved the imagage of a lost soul, stranded, and very much hurt and alone. Great poem :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

An emotional reflection of a teenagers journey through life searching for their identity.

A wonderfully written poem!

[osnapitzlainee]

I love the flow of the poem and when I was reading, a little rythm was going on in my head. So cootos to you =)